Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I usually looking forward' và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually visit entertainment websites like TikTok, YouTube, and Facebook because they help me relax and reduce stress after a long day at school.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'for whom to' và 'learning education'. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: My favorite website is YouTube because it is very popular among people my age. It is convenient and useful for those who want to learn new skills or gain knowledge.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý đến thì động từ và số nhiều/số ít trong câu. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và có liên từ để nối ý, tránh câu bị rời rạc.

예시: YouTube has changed a lot over the years. It has improved its features to make it easier for everyone to use.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp lại câu hỏi và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.

예시: Popular websites in my country include YouTube and TikTok. They are suitable for all ages, especially young people, because they can learn a lot from educational tutorials.

× Well I usually looking forward to entertainment website like Tiktok, YouTube or Facebook is relax.

✓ Well I usually look forward to entertainment websites like TikTok, YouTube, or Facebook to relax.

The phrase 'I usually looking forward' is incorrect because 'usually' requires the base form of the verb after it, so it should be 'I usually look forward'. Also, 'website' should be plural 'websites' because multiple sites are mentioned. Additionally, 'is relax' is incorrect; it should be 'to relax' to express purpose.

× Well I usually looking forward to entertainment website like Tiktok, YouTube or Facebook is relax.

✓ Well I usually look forward to entertainment websites like TikTok, YouTube, or Facebook to relax.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because multiple websites are listed.

× Well I usually looking forward to entertainment website like Tiktok, YouTube or Facebook is relax.

✓ Well I usually look forward to entertainment websites like TikTok, YouTube, or Facebook to relax.

No definite article 'the' is needed before 'entertainment websites' in this context.

× It help me feel relaxed and reduce stress after a long day at school.

✓ It helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress after a long day at school.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verbs should be 'helps' and 'reduces' to agree in number.

× It help me feel relaxed and reduce stress after a long day at school.

✓ It helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress after a long day at school.

In English, verbs in the present tense must agree with their subjects. For third person singular subjects like 'It', verbs take an 's' ending.

× My favorite website is YouTube, which is very common for many people during my age.

✓ My favorite website is YouTube, which is very common among many people my age.

The phrase 'during my age' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'my age' or 'people my age'. Also, 'for many people' should be 'among many people' to indicate inclusion within a group.

× It's very convenient and useful for whom to, uh, want to learn some new skills or learning education.

✓ It's very convenient and useful for those who want to learn new skills or study.

'For whom to want' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for those who want'. Also, 'learning education' is awkward; 'study' or 'learn' is better.

× Well YouTube change a lot through many years.

✓ Well YouTube has changed a lot over the years.

The verb 'change' should be in the present perfect tense 'has changed' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'through many years' is better expressed as 'over the years'.

× Well YouTube change a lot through many years.

✓ Well YouTube has changed a lot over the years.

No definite article is needed before 'YouTube'.

× It's improve the features to makes everyone easier to use.

✓ It has improved the features to make it easier for everyone to use.

'It's improve' is incorrect; it should be 'It has improved' (present perfect). 'Makes' should be 'make' because it follows 'to' (infinitive). Also, 'easier to use' needs 'it' for clarity and 'for everyone' to specify the user group.

× What kind of websites are popular in my country on YouTube and Tiktok which is suitable for any age, especially younger people because they can get a lot of knowledge by watching the tutorials of education.

✓ Popular websites in my country include YouTube and TikTok, which are suitable for all ages, especially younger people, because they can gain a lot of knowledge by watching educational tutorials.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'What kind of websites are popular in my country on YouTube and TikTok' is unclear. The correction clarifies the subject and verb agreement, uses plural forms, and improves clarity and flow.