Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I often visit social media websites on my phone or computer because they help me keep in touch with friends. Also, I enjoy watching interesting videos and learning useful daily knowledge there.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议先明确网站名称，然后简洁说明喜欢的原因，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: My favorite website is "Write a Book Now," which is very popular in China. On this site, I can share my daily life and also do online shopping, which I find very interesting.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单句表达观点，明确说明变化，并用连接词连接句子。

예시: Yes, websites used to be boring in the past. However, now their interfaces are more creative, and companies pay more attention to user-friendliness and experience. Therefore, they add many new features.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，且网站名称表达不准确。建议准确表达网站名称，简洁说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Social media websites like Redbook and TikTok are very popular in my country because people can share their daily lives and stay connected with friends.

× I prefer to use the social media, mobile phone or computer because it can keep in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like it.

✓ I prefer to use social media, mobile phones, or computers because they can keep me in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like them.

“social media”, “mobile phone”, “computer”在这里应使用复数形式，因为指的是一般类别或多种设备。同时，代词“it”应改为“they”以对应复数。

× I prefer to use the social media, mobile phone or computer because it can keep in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like it.

✓ I prefer to use social media, mobile phones, or computers because they can keep me in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like them.

“the social media”中“the”不应使用，因为“social media”是泛指，不是特指某个社交媒体。

× I prefer to use the social media, mobile phone or computer because it can keep in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like it.

✓ I prefer to use social media, mobile phones, or computers because they can keep me in touch with my friends and I can browse many interesting videos or useful daily knowledge, so I like them.

短语“keep in touch with”前应加宾语“me”，即“keep me in touch with”，否则句意不完整。

× My favorite website is Write a book Now it's very popular website and up in China we can I can post some daily life in this website and also I can online shopping in this website. It's very interesting.

✓ My favorite website is Write a Book Now. It's a very popular website in China. I can post some daily life updates on this website and also do online shopping on this website. It's very interesting.

“website”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示泛指一个网站。

× My favorite website is Write a book Now it's very popular website and up in China we can I can post some daily life in this website and also I can online shopping in this website. It's very interesting.

✓ My favorite website is Write a Book Now. It's a very popular website in China. I can post some daily life updates on this website and also do online shopping on this website. It's very interesting.

“post some daily life in this website”应改为“post some daily life updates on this website”，介词“on”用于表示在网站上发布内容。

× My favorite website is Write a book Now it's very popular website and up in China we can I can post some daily life in this website and also I can online shopping in this website. It's very interesting.

✓ My favorite website is Write a Book Now. It's a very popular website in China. I can post some daily life updates on this website and also do online shopping on this website. It's very interesting.

“online shopping in this website”应改为“do online shopping on this website”，介词“on”用于表示在网站上购物。

× Yes, in the past maybe the website is very boring, but now I think the interface is more creative and maybe the company's more attention the user friendly and user experience, so they add many different new fictions.

✓ Yes, in the past maybe the websites were very boring, but now I think the interfaces are more creative and maybe the company pays more attention to user-friendliness and user experience, so they add many different new functions.

“website”应使用复数“websites”，因为指多个网站；“interface”也应复数“interfaces”。

× Yes, in the past maybe the website is very boring, but now I think the interface is more creative and maybe the company's more attention the user friendly and user experience, so they add many different new fictions.

✓ Yes, in the past maybe the websites were very boring, but now I think the interfaces are more creative and maybe the company pays more attention to user-friendliness and user experience, so they add many different new functions.

描述过去的情况时，动词应使用过去时态，“is”应改为“were”。

× Yes, in the past maybe the website is very boring, but now I think the interface is more creative and maybe the company's more attention the user friendly and user experience, so they add many different new fictions.

✓ Yes, in the past maybe the websites were very boring, but now I think the interfaces are more creative and maybe the company pays more attention to user-friendliness and user experience, so they add many different new functions.

“company's more attention the user friendly and user experience”中应使用介词“to”，即“pays more attention to”。

× Yes, in the past maybe the website is very boring, but now I think the interface is more creative and maybe the company's more attention the user friendly and user experience, so they add many different new fictions.

✓ Yes, in the past maybe the websites were very boring, but now I think the interfaces are more creative and maybe the company pays more attention to user-friendliness and user experience, so they add many different new functions.

“user friendly”应改为复合形容词“user-friendliness”，表示“用户友好性”，更符合语境。

× Yes, in the past maybe the website is very boring, but now I think the interface is more creative and maybe the company's more attention the user friendly and user experience, so they add many different new fictions.

✓ Yes, in the past maybe the websites were very boring, but now I think the interfaces are more creative and maybe the company pays more attention to user-friendliness and user experience, so they add many different new functions.

“fictions”应为“functions”，意为“功能”，原词拼写错误且语义不符。

× I think it also some social media website is more popular like Red Bulls or Red Books or Tik Toks because people can share their daily life and can keep in touch with their friends. Yeah.

✓ I think some social media websites are more popular like Red Bull, Red Book, or TikTok because people can share their daily life and keep in touch with their friends.

“website”应使用复数“websites”，因为指多个网站；品牌名称应为单数形式。

× I think it also some social media website is more popular like Red Bulls or Red Books or Tik Toks because people can share their daily life and can keep in touch with their friends. Yeah.

✓ I think some social media websites are more popular like Red Bull, Red Book, or TikTok because people can share their daily life and keep in touch with their friends.

“website is”应改为“websites are”，主谓一致，复数主语对应复数动词。

× I think it also some social media website is more popular like Red Bulls or Red Books or Tik Toks because people can share their daily life and can keep in touch with their friends. Yeah.

✓ I think some social media websites are more popular like Red Bull, Red Book, or TikTok because people can share their daily life and keep in touch with their friends.

句首“it”多余，应删除，避免代词使用错误。