Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: I often visit websites for different purposes such as reading news, studying, shopping, and watching videos. The Internet plays an essential role in my daily life as it provides both information and entertainment.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Make sure to complete your thoughts and use correct verb forms. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers a wide variety of videos on many topics. I use it almost every day to watch educational content, music videos, and tutorials, which help me to learn new things and develop new skills.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant phrases like 'Are you fine with this?'. Avoid such expressions in formal speaking tests. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, some websites I visit have changed recently. For instance, their layouts and designs have become more advanced and user-friendly. Additionally, many now offer personalized content. However, the increase in advertisements can be quite annoying.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and repetition. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

예시: In my country, popular websites include Facebook, Instagram, and YouTube. These platforms are used not only for educational purposes but also to stay connected with friends and family, helping people to socialize effectively.

× I visit websites everyday for various purposes like reading, news, studying.

✓ I visit websites every day for various purposes like reading news and studying.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace', but the correct phrase here is 'every day' meaning 'each day'. Also, 'reading, news, studying' is awkward; 'reading news and studying' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I often use it almost every day for watch educational content, music videos and tutorials which help me to develop new learning, to help me to develop new skills and.

✓ I often use it almost every day to watch educational content, music videos, and tutorials which help me develop new skills.

After 'use it for', the verb should be in the '-ing' form or use 'to' + base verb. Here, 'for watch' is incorrect; it should be 'to watch'. Also, 'help me to develop new learning, to help me to develop new skills and' is redundant and incomplete; simplified to 'help me develop new skills'.

× Are you fine with this? Several websites and some of them have changed recently.

✓ Are you fine with this? Several websites, and some of them, have changed recently.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding commas clarifies the meaning. Alternatively, 'Several websites have changed recently, and some of them have updated their layout and design.' would be better.

× For example, their layout and designs are more advanced and user friendly and some also offer the personalized content.

✓ For example, their layouts and designs are more advanced and user-friendly, and some also offer personalized content.

'User friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly' when used as an adjective. 'The personalized content' is incorrect; 'personalized content' without 'the' is correct here. Also, 'layout' should be plural 'layouts' to match 'designs'.

× However, some websites also added many ads which can be a bit frustrating Annoying.

✓ However, some websites have also added many ads which can be a bit frustrating and annoying.

'Added' should be in present perfect 'have added' to indicate recent changes. 'Frustrating Annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'frustrating and annoying' to connect the two adjectives properly.

× In my country, there are various types of websites are popular like Facebook, Instagram and YouTube because they serve not only for educational purposes but also staying connected with the friends and we socialize socialize each other.

✓ In my country, various types of websites are popular like Facebook, Instagram, and YouTube because they serve not only educational purposes but also help people stay connected with friends and socialize with each other.

The sentence has redundancy with 'are' twice. 'Serve not only for educational purposes' should be 'serve not only educational purposes'. 'Staying connected with the friends' should be 'help people stay connected with friends'. 'We socialize socialize each other' is incorrect and repetitive; corrected to 'socialize with each other'.