Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: I often visit websites like Facebook, YouTube, and WhatsApp because they help me stay connected with friends and access daily news. For example, YouTube provides me with educational videos, while Facebook keeps me updated on social events.

제안: Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid hesitation sounds to improve fluency.

예시: My favourite website is Google because it allows me to quickly gather and explore information on various topics. Additionally, it provides the latest news updates, which helps me stay informed about current events.

제안: Make sure to answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and avoid hesitation. Provide specific examples of changes and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have started visiting new websites recently, such as academic journals and news portals, because I do more research now. These websites provide updated articles, which are very convenient for my studies.

제안: Answer directly and clearly with a topic sentence. Use linking words to add details and avoid filler words. Provide specific reasons why these websites are popular.

예시: In my country, popular websites include Google, Safari, and Yahoo because people use them to gather information quickly. For instance, many rely on Google for searching news and educational content.

× In my country, most of people use, uh, Google Safari as well as, uh, uh, Yahoo.

✓ In my country, most people use Google, Safari, as well as Yahoo.

The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; it should be 'most people' without 'of'. This is a common singular and plural issue where 'most' directly modifies a plural noun without 'of'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× Actually, I openly say often visit Facebook, YouTube, SLS, WhatsApp, uh.

✓ Actually, I often openly say I visit Facebook, YouTube, SLS, WhatsApp, uh.

The original sentence has awkward word order and missing prepositions. The phrase 'say often visit' is incorrect; it should be 'say I often visit' to correctly use the verb and preposition structure.

× I explore the information and the day-to-day work and news from them and.

✓ I explore information, day-to-day work, and news from them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' and has redundant articles like 'the' before uncountable nouns. The structure is corrected for clarity and completeness.

× Actually my favorite website is Google because it, it tells me to uh, gather ex and explore information and uh, latest news uh, like that it OK, uh.

✓ Actually, my favorite website is Google because it helps me gather and explore information and the latest news.

The original sentence has filler words and unclear phrases like 'gather ex' and 'like that it OK'. These are removed and the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And also I, uh, visit. Who said ah, because I do my research and, uh, I explore the new things and new articles, which is, uh, very convenient to me.

✓ Also, I visit websites because I do my research and explore new things and articles, which are very convenient for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear with phrases like 'Who said ah'. It is corrected to a clear, complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and prepositions.