Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In your answer, try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, for example, say 'math has many formulas' instead of 'math has so many formula'. Also, provide clearer supporting details with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I think math is the most challenging subject at school because it involves many formulas and requires precise problem-solving. For example, solving equations step by step can be difficult, but practicing regularly helps me improve.

제안: Try to use correct plural forms and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'many exercise', say 'many exercises'. Also, explain why you like to challenge yourself with specific examples.

예시: Yes, I definitely like to challenge myself, especially in my studies. For instance, during high school, I practiced many exercises repeatedly until I understood the concepts clearly.

제안: Avoid awkward phrases and improve clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, instead of 'it is incredible to happen', say 'it is an incredible experience'. Also, be more specific about how challenges help you grow.

예시: I prefer to live a life full of challenges because they help me learn new things and grow stronger. For example, overcoming difficulties makes me more confident and prepared for the future.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, explain the steps you take to solve problems clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'I use some to do that'.

예시: When I face challenges in daily life, I try to understand the problem carefully. Then, I think step by step to find a solution until I solve it successfully.

× The subject that I think it is most difficult and challenging at school would be math, because math has so many formula and it's also content about the solution of what we need to do in the right way.

✓ The subject that I think is most difficult and challenging at school would be math, because math has so many formulas and it's also content about the solution of what we need to do in the right way.

The word 'formula' should be plural 'formulas' because it refers to many formulas in math. Also, the phrase 'I think it is' is redundant; 'I think is' is correct here because 'that' is the subject of the clause. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× So I think much is very difficult for me to understand and do it.

✓ So I think math is very difficult for me to understand and do it.

The word 'much' is incorrect here; it should be 'math' to refer to the subject. This is a singular noun, so it fits the context. Using the correct noun clarifies the meaning.

× I used to challenge myself with many exercise during my high school class.

✓ I used to challenge myself with many exercises during my high school class.

The word 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple practice activities. This correction ensures proper plural form for countable nouns.

× So after that I need to practice exercise, do it again and again until I get it correctly.

✓ So after that I need to practice exercises, doing them again and again until I get them correctly.

'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to indicate multiple practice tasks. Also, 'do it' should be 'doing them' to match plural exercises. This improves noun number agreement and verb form consistency.

× Well, I prefer to live in a life that has a lot of challenges because having challenges would allow me to learn something new and it is incredible to happen.

✓ Well, I prefer to live a life that has a lot of challenges because having challenges would allow me to learn something new and it is incredible to happen.

The preposition 'in' before 'a life' is unnecessary and incorrect. We say 'live a life' without 'in'. Removing 'in' corrects the prepositional usage.

× I would say it's such a problem that can make me strong and feel more confident in my lifetime.

✓ I would say it's such a challenge that can make me strong and feel more confident in my lifetime.

The word 'problem' is less appropriate here; 'challenge' fits better with the context of the previous sentence. This is a lexical choice to improve clarity and coherence.

× So yeah, I prefer to live in that challenge.

✓ So yeah, I prefer to live with that challenge.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'live with' is the correct phrase to express experiencing or dealing with a challenge. This corrects prepositional usage.

× Well, I used to deal with challenges in my past life, but I would say to achieve my daily life activity problem, I would say I use some to do that.

✓ Well, I used to deal with challenges in my past life, but I would say to achieve my daily life activity goals, I use some methods to do that.

The phrase 'daily life activity problem' is unclear and awkward; 'daily life activity goals' is clearer. Also, 'I use some to do that' is incomplete; specifying 'methods' clarifies the meaning. This improves clarity and word choice.

× Like I think correctly, properly understand it step by step when I until I reach the solution to deal with it.

✓ Like I think carefully and properly understand it step by step until I reach the solution to deal with it.

The phrase 'when I until' is incorrect and redundant; 'until' alone suffices. Also, 'think correctly' is better expressed as 'think carefully'. This correction improves prepositional and adverb usage and sentence clarity.