Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“talks about many concepts that are not understandable for me”可以更自然地表达为“involves many concepts that I find difficult to understand”。此外，句子结构可以更简洁，避免重复。

예시: I find chemistry the most challenging subject in secondary school because it involves many complex concepts like atoms and molecules, and I also need to calculate chemical reaction formulas, which can be difficult to understand.

제안: 回答中应注意语法一致性，如“new solution”应为“new solutions”，“improve”应为“improves”。同时，可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, definitely. I enjoy challenging myself because when I face difficulties, I try to come up with new solutions and build resilience. Moreover, overcoming obstacles not only improves my problem-solving skills but also offers me a great opportunity to become mentally mature.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“obstacles helps”应为“obstacles help”。句子结构可以更清晰，避免重复表达“help”。建议使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I don't like a life full of too many obstacles, but having a moderate amount of challenges is perfect because they help me improve my abilities and resilience, which in turn boosts my confidence.

제안: 回答中多处用词错误，如“charges”应为“challenges”，“capable to solve”应为“capable of solving”。句子结构不够自然，建议简化表达并使用连接词。

예시: It depends on the type of challenges. For those I can solve, I first analyze the main problem and then use practical methods to address it. For those I can't solve, I try to stay positive.

× It's hard to digest those knowledge of atoms and molecules and I also need to calculate those formulas for chemical reaction.

✓ It's hard to digest that knowledge of atoms and molecules and I also need to calculate those formulas for chemical reactions.

“knowledge”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“those knowledge”；“chemical reaction”应为复数形式“chemical reactions”，因为前文提到多个公式对应多个反应。

× I try to come up with new solution and build up resilience.

✓ I try to come up with new solutions and build up resilience.

“solution”在此处应为复数形式“solutions”，因为“new”修饰复数名词时需用复数形式。

× Overcoming obstacles not only improve my problem solving skills but also offer me a great opportunity to become mentally mature.

✓ Overcoming obstacles not only improves my problem solving skills but also offers me a great opportunity to become mentally mature.

主语“Overcoming obstacles”是单数形式，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“improves”和“offers”。

× I don't like living in a life with too many obstacles, but with medium challenges that is absolutely perfect because those obstacles helps to boost my ability and resilience, which can help me be more confident.

✓ I don't like living a life with too many obstacles, but with medium challenges that are absolutely perfect because those obstacles help to boost my ability and resilience, which can help me be more confident.

“living in a life”中“in”多余，应直接说“living a life”；“challenges”是复数，谓语动词应用复数“are”；“obstacles”是复数，谓语动词应用复数“help”。

× It depends on the types of charges.

✓ It depends on the types of challenges.

“charges”与上下文不符，应为“challenges”表示“挑战”。

× For those charges I am capable to solve, I will first analyze the main problem of this difficulty and then use some practical ways to solve it.

✓ For those challenges I am capable of solving, I will first analyze the main problem of this difficulty and then use some practical ways to solve it.

“charges”应为“challenges”；“capable to solve”应为“capable of solving”，动词需用-ing形式且介词搭配正确。

× For those I can't solve, I will be positive.

✓ For those I can't solve, I will stay positive.

“be positive”表达不够自然，常用“stay positive”表示保持积极态度。