Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly stating the subject and then explaining why it is challenging, using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and improve sentence clarity.

예시: I find mathematics the most challenging subject at school because it involves a lot of calculations and formulas. Sometimes, I get confused during exams when I have to recall many formulas quickly. Therefore, I feel it requires a lot of practice and focus.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrases and minor grammatical errors. To improve, use more natural expressions and correct idioms. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because it helps me improve academically. For example, last year I aimed to be the top student in my class, and after working hard late into the night, I achieved that goal and felt very proud.

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure, correct verb forms, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, clarify your examples and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, I consider myself an adventurous person who enjoys facing challenges. For instance, I always participate in school competitions regardless of winning or losing. Last year, I even tried bungee jumping in Manali, which was an exciting experience.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. To improve, use correct sentence structures, avoid repetition, and link your ideas logically. Also, be specific about your methods for dealing with challenges.

예시: When I face challenges, I first take a deep breath to stay calm because frustration can prevent me from finding solutions. Then, I analyze the situation carefully before making any decisions to solve the problem effectively.

× Well, there are load of subjects in my school and I felt that is quite daunting for me.

✓ Well, there are loads of subjects in my school and I felt that they are quite daunting for me.

The phrase 'load of subjects' should be 'loads of subjects' to correctly express plural quantity. Also, 'that is' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural noun 'subjects'.

× But if I talk about such a task that is a very challenging.

✓ But if I talk about such a task, it is very challenging.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding a comma and changing 'that is' to 'it is' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× It is a mathematics because in this we have to do did a lot of calculation.

✓ It is mathematics because in this we have to do a lot of calculations.

'Mathematics' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'calculation' should be plural 'calculations' to match the context. The phrase 'do did' is incorrect and should be 'do'.

× It is a mathematics because in this we have to do did a lot of calculation.

✓ It is mathematics because in this we have to do a lot of calculations.

The phrase 'do did' is incorrect; 'did' is past tense and should be removed to maintain present tense consistency.

× Sometime I am just a bit confused a part of for me there is a lot of formula that I have to be learn at the time of examination.

✓ Sometimes I am just a bit confused because for me there are a lot of formulas that I have to learn at the time of examination.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'a part of' is incorrect here and replaced with 'because'. 'formula' should be plural 'formulas'. 'have to be learn' should be 'have to learn' to use the correct verb form.

× So I felt that it was one of the subject in which I face a lot of.

✓ So I felt that it was one of the subjects in which I faced a lot of challenges.

'subject' should be plural 'subjects' after 'one of the'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'challenges' completes the thought. 'face' should be past tense 'faced' to match 'felt'.

× Yes, of course, I really like to challenge myself, it will help to improve my academic performance.

✓ Yes, of course, I really like to challenge myself; it helps to improve my academic performance.

The modal 'will' is not appropriate here because the statement is about a general truth. Using 'helps' in present tense is better. Also, the comma should be replaced with a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses.

× Also, I vividly remember that last year I challenged myself to become A to God of first positions with a good percentage in my examinations, and I did it after burn the midnight oil.

✓ Also, I vividly remember that last year I challenged myself to become the top student with a good percentage in my examinations, and I did it after burning the midnight oil.

'A to God of first positions' is unclear and corrected to 'the top student'. 'after burn' should be 'after burning' to use the correct gerund form after 'after'.

× I passed with the flying colors and I felt proud on myself.

✓ I passed with flying colors and I felt proud of myself.

The phrase is 'with flying colors' without 'the'. Also, the correct preposition is 'proud of', not 'proud on'.

× Yes, of course, sometime I felt that I am very adventurous person who really like to take a face the challenges in their life.

✓ Yes, of course, sometimes I feel that I am a very adventurous person who really likes to face the challenges in life.

'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'felt' should be 'feel' to maintain present tense. 'a very adventurous person' needs the article 'a'. 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject 'person'. 'take a face' is incorrect and corrected to 'face'. 'their life' should be 'life' to match singular subject.

× Moreover, whenever any type of competition are mainly held in our school, I always participated whether I won it or lose it.

✓ Moreover, whenever any type of competition is held in our school, I always participate whether I win or lose.

'competition' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'participated' should be 'participate' to maintain present tense. 'won it or lose it' should be 'win or lose' for parallel structure and tense consistency.

× Apart from it, I vividly remember that last year I visited Manali where I also take a participate in a bungee jumping and I won it.

✓ Apart from that, I vividly remember that last year I visited Manali where I also took part in bungee jumping and I won.

'take a participate' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'took part'. 'take' should be past tense 'took' to match 'visited'. 'bungee jumping' does not need 'a'. 'won it' can be simplified to 'won'.

× Life well whenever any type of challenges come into my life, first of all I take a loan long breath and try to keep my body become calm because at that moment if I get frustrated I didn't get find a solution quickly.

✓ Well, whenever any type of challenge comes into my life, first of all I take a long deep breath and try to keep my body calm because at that moment if I get frustrated, I can't find a solution quickly.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors: 'Life well' is corrected to 'Well'. 'challenges' should be singular 'challenge' to agree with 'any type'. 'come' should be 'comes' for subject-verb agreement. 'loan long breath' is incorrect; corrected to 'long deep breath'. 'keep my body become calm' is incorrect; corrected to 'keep my body calm'. 'didn't get find' is incorrect; corrected to 'can't find' for present tense and meaning.

× After that I try to understand such a situation clearly so that when I solve it I I make a decisions instead.

✓ After that, I try to understand the situation clearly so that when I solve it, I make decisions accordingly.

The sentence has repetition 'I I' and awkward phrasing. 'such a situation' is better as 'the situation'. 'make a decisions' should be 'make decisions' (no article before plural). 'instead' is unclear and replaced with 'accordingly' for clarity.