Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些冗长且不够自然，表达中断且语法不够准确。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体细节支持，同时避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I think math is the most challenging subject at school because it involves many complex formulas and problem-solving skills that require a lot of practice.

제안: 回答中有语音停顿和不连贯，例子表达不清晰。建议练习流利表达，使用清晰具体的例子，并避免重复和犹豫。

예시: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because overcoming difficulties gives me a great sense of achievement. For example, I once set a goal to lose 10 kilograms and succeeded through regular exercise and diet control.

제안: 回答中断且表达不完整，缺少连贯的细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子流畅，并提供具体细节支持。

예시: Yes, I prefer a life full of challenges because it helps me discover my potential. For instance, I once left a stable job to become a consultant, which boosted my confidence and skills.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但细节可以更具体，连接词使用不足。建议增加连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明学习了哪些知识。

예시: When I face challenges, I try to solve them independently. For example, last year I worked on a difficult project in a new industry, so I studied market trends and technical skills to complete it successfully.

× I think math is the most challenging subject at school because learning math requires very high level of IQ and you have to remember lots of formula which is very challenging and.

✓ I think math is the most challenging subject at school because learning math requires a very high level of IQ and you have to remember lots of formulas, which is very challenging.

这里“very high level of IQ”前缺少冠词“a”，应为“a very high level of IQ”。另外，“lots of formula”中的“formula”应为复数形式“formulas”，因为“lots of”后面需要复数名词。

× Yes, I like to challenge myself because successfully dealing with the challenge gave me a sense of accomplishment. For example, I, I, I said umm, go for me to losing 10K kilograms weight.

✓ Yes, I like to challenge myself because successfully dealing with the challenge gives me a sense of accomplishment. For example, I, I, I said umm, going for me to lose 10 kilograms weight.

“gave”应改为现在时“gives”，因为前半句是一般现在时描述习惯行为。后半句“go for me to losing 10K kilograms weight”结构不正确，应改为“going for me to lose 10 kilograms weight”，动词形式和表达更自然。

× Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges because this kind of life can inspire your potential. For example, I had quit a job, quit a very stable job and become umm consultant, which gave me more confidence and.

✓ Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges because this kind of life can inspire your potential. For example, I quit a job, quit a very stable job and became a consultant, which gave me more confidence.

“had quit”应改为一般过去时“quit”，因为这里描述的是过去的具体事件。动词“become”应改为过去式“became”，与前文时态一致。

× When facing challenges in daily life, I always prepare to solve the problem independently. For example, last year I got a very difficult project in an entirely new industry. To successfully finish the project, I learned a lot of knowledge.

✓ When facing challenges in daily life, I always prepare to solve problems independently. For example, last year I got a very difficult project in an entirely new industry. To successfully finish the project, I learned a lot.

“prepare to solve the problem”中“the problem”应改为复数“problems”，因为面对的是一般性挑战。最后一句“learned a lot of knowledge”表达不自然，通常说“learned a lot”即可，避免重复。