Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa natural janakute, sentence structure mo mada mada desu. Tokidoki redundant na kotoba mo tsukatte iru node, motto seikaku ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'The most challenging subject for me was Nepali because I found it difficult to read and write. However, I was good at math.' to iu fuu ni, motto rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

예시: The most challenging subject for me was Nepali because I found it difficult to read and write. However, I was good at math, which I enjoyed more.

제안: Koko de wa, 'selling yourself' no imi ga wakari nikui desu. Motto wakariyasui kotoba wo tsukatte, setsumei mo shite kudasai. Mata, sentence ga chotto muzukashii node, motto kantan de seikaku ni shite kudasai.

예시: Yes, I like to challenge myself because I believe it helps me improve my skills. For example, when I exercise, I set a timer to push myself to do better.

제안: Koko no answer wa imi ga sukoshi wakari nikui desu. Motto seikaku ni, rikai shi yasui kotoba de kotaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I prefer a comfortable life, but I also like to work hard to achieve my goals.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: I prefer to live a comfortable and easy life, but at the same time, I like to work hard to earn rewards and achieve my goals.

제안: Answer wa yoku kangaete iru koto ga wakarimasu ga, eigo no hyougen ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de wakari nikui desu. Motto kantan de seikaku na kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I stay calm and think carefully before deciding to do tasks, even if I am not interested in them.' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai.

예시: When I face challenges, I stay calm and think carefully. I try to understand why the task is necessary, even if I don't like it, and then I do it.

× The lists are subject related to our language.

✓ The subjects related to our language.

'Lists' is plural and does not fit the context. The correct plural noun is 'subjects' to match the meaning. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I used to skip if I get chance to read or write Nepali.

✓ I used to skip if I got the chance to read or write Nepali.

The sentence mixes past tense 'used to' with present tense 'get'. Both verbs should be in past tense for consistency. This is a past tense issue.

× I was quite good at math and but.

✓ I was quite good at math, though.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and but', which is incorrect conjunction usage and sentence structure. It should be rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, I'd like to challenge myself because I believe selling yourself is the only key to find your house or skills.

✓ Yeah, I'd like to challenge myself because I believe challenging yourself is the only key to finding your goals or skills.

The pronouns 'yourself' and 'your' are inconsistent with the speaker's perspective. Also, 'selling yourself' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'challenging yourself'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and word choice.

× So I often do challenges such as while doing exercise I set timer and while while completing tasks I do in pay.

✓ So I often set challenges, such as setting a timer while exercising and while completing tasks, I do them in a timely manner.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'Set timer' needs an article, and 'do in pay' is unclear. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.

× Well, I like to live my life with full easiest and luxury because I am kind of person who is more important towards it.

✓ Well, I like to live my life with full ease and luxury because I am the kind of person who values that more.

'Full easiest' is incorrect; 'full ease' or 'ease' is appropriate. Also, 'more important towards it' is awkward and incorrect adjective/adverb usage.

× But at the same time I like to work for it in in rewards such that I can.

✓ But at the same time, I like to work for it to earn rewards.

The sentence is incomplete and has repeated words 'in in'. It needs restructuring for clarity and completeness.

× I often be selfless and think about it, and with the composed mind I came to the conclusion of the necessity of doing any tasks, even if that is not on my interest.

✓ I often am selfless and think about it, and with a composed mind, I come to the conclusion of the necessity of doing any tasks, even if they are not of my interest.

'I often be' is incorrect; it should be 'I often am'. Also, tense inconsistency with 'came' and 'come'. 'That is not on my interest' should be 'they are not of my interest'. This is a present tense and verb form issue.