Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some language errors. You should clarify the subject name (perhaps you meant "physics" or another subject) and avoid redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: I think physics is the most challenging subject at school because it involves many complex concepts and theories. For example, understanding laws of motion requires careful study, which makes it difficult to answer exam questions effectively.

제안: Your answer shows your preferences but is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to contrast your interests. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid ending sentences abruptly.

예시: I like to challenge myself in language subjects such as Chinese or English because I find them interesting. However, I avoid challenging myself in subjects like chemistry or physics since I find them too difficult.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains some pronunciation or word choice errors ("live a lie" instead of "live a life") and some redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I don't like to live a life full of challenges; however, I believe some challenges can be beneficial. For instance, learning a new language can be stressful but also motivating and enjoyable if approached positively.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases.

예시: I usually deal with challenges one at a time because I prefer to focus on solving each problem efficiently. This approach helps me manage my life more easily and stay happy.

× I think it's visas because when it comes to that subject, you will have to understand a lot of concepts, a lot of theories so that you can know how to answer the questions in the paper so that you can get higher score of that subject.

✓ I think it's visa because when it comes to that subject, you will have to understand a lot of concepts, a lot of theories so that you can know how to answer the questions in the paper so that you can get a higher score in that subject.

The word 'visas' is plural but the context suggests a singular subject, so 'visa' is correct. Also, 'higher score' needs an article 'a' before it, and 'of that subject' should be 'in that subject' to correctly express the relationship. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think it's visas because when it comes to that subject, you will have to understand a lot of concepts, a lot of theories so that you can know how to answer the questions in the paper so that you can get higher score of that subject.

✓ I think it's visa because when it comes to that subject, you will have to understand a lot of concepts, a lot of theories so that you can know how to answer the questions in the paper so that you can get a higher score in that subject.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used with 'score'; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate the subject area. Also, 'a' is needed before 'higher score' to indicate one of many possible scores.

× I like to challenge myself in a certain area, for example, Chinese or English, something involved languages because I am more interesting in those areas.

✓ I like to challenge myself in a certain area, for example, Chinese or English, something involving languages because I am more interested in those areas.

The phrase 'something involved languages' is incorrect; it should be 'something involving languages' to use the correct verb form. Also, 'more interesting' should be 'more interested' because the speaker is describing their feelings, not the qualities of the areas.

× But when it comes to chemistry or physics, those are the areas I don't like to challenge myself because it's too difficult for me and I'm.

✓ But when it comes to chemistry or physics, those are the areas where I don't like to challenge myself because they are too difficult for me.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and I'm' which is incomplete and unclear. Also, 'it's' should be 'they are' to agree with the plural subject 'chemistry or physics'. The phrase 'areas I don't like to challenge myself' is awkward; adding 'where' improves clarity.

× I don't like to live a lie with a lot of challenges because I think for some challenges, they can be very helpful for your motivations, for your health, for your life.

✓ I don't like to live a life with a lot of challenges because I think some challenges can be very helpful for your motivation, your health, and your life.

The word 'lie' is incorrect; it should be 'life'. Also, 'for your motivations' should be 'for your motivation' as 'motivation' is usually uncountable. The phrase 'for some challenges, they can be' is redundant; 'some challenges can be' is sufficient.

× For example, learning a language, even though learning a language, there would be a lot of stressful, uh, challenges, but you can embrace it in a fun way.

✓ For example, learning a language, even though it can be stressful, there will be a lot of challenges, but you can embrace it in a fun way.

The adjective 'stressful' is incorrectly used to describe 'challenges'; it is better to say 'it can be stressful' to describe the process. Also, 'there would be' is changed to 'there will be' to match the present/future context. Removing filler words like 'uh' improves clarity.

× I don't really have a lot of challenges in my life because I don't like to set a lot of challenges in my life.

✓ I don't really have a lot of challenges in my life because I don't like to set many challenges in my life.

The quantifier 'a lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more appropriate with countable nouns like 'challenges' in negative sentences. This improves the naturalness of the sentence.

× Instead, I was at one challenge at a time so that I can fix it in a more easy way with less time so that I can move to another challenge in life.

✓ Instead, I take on one challenge at a time so that I can fix it in an easier way with less time so that I can move to another challenge in life.

The phrase 'I was at one challenge' is incorrect; 'I take on one challenge' is correct. 'More easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form of 'easy'. Also, 'with less time' is acceptable but 'in less time' is more natural.

× It's a more easy way to live a better life and happy life.

✓ It's an easier way to live a better and happier life.

'More easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form. Also, 'happy life' should be 'happier life' to match the comparative form. Combining 'better life and happy life' into 'better and happier life' is more natural.