Challenges— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
수험생
I think it must be math because, uh, I still remember that whatever I was hard to math, I, my grades were still only 90 or 95 or 93. So it was very difficult for me and it also troubled me at that time. So I don't like this and I think that is the most challenge, uh.
시험관
Do you like to challenge yourself?
수험생
I think I like because, uh, I'm not a person who's very peaceful and I there, there are always many anxiety around me. So, uh, I do manage challenges every day in my life. Uh, of course, maybe I love this challenging life.
시험관
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
수험생
Of course, that's what I said. My life is full of many different challenges every day. So first of all, I think the challenge in life can make our willpower more bigger and stronger. And secondly, the challenging life can also help us to aid the ability of taking many different risks.
시험관
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
수험생
Well, I'm not a person who's very good at taking risks or dealing with these challenges. So, uh, every time I make challenges, first of all, I will cry, uh, cry a lot. And, but after I cry, uh, I will, I will, I will, I will do things very well because I, I know I have to do this. I have to deal with all the problems.
평가
총점
Part 1
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有较多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅度。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。
예시: I think math is the most challenging subject for me because I often found it difficult to understand the concepts. Although I scored around 90, I still struggled and felt troubled by it.
Do you like to challenge yourself?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且有重复和语气词，影响自然流畅。建议使用更简洁明确的句子，表达对挑战的态度。
예시: Yes, I like to challenge myself because I often feel anxious and restless. Facing challenges every day helps me grow and keeps my life interesting.
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“more bigger”和“aid the ability”。建议注意语法准确性，使用恰当词汇表达观点。
예시: Yes, I enjoy a life full of challenges because they help strengthen my willpower. Also, facing challenges improves my ability to take risks confidently.
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中重复和语气词较多，表达不够连贯。建议减少重复，使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明应对挑战的方法。
예시: I usually find challenges difficult at first and sometimes feel upset. However, after calming down, I try to face the problems calmly and solve them step by step.
문법
× I think it must be math because, uh, I still remember that whatever I was hard to math, I, my grades were still only 90 or 95 or 93.
✓ I think it must be math because, uh, I still remember that whatever I found hard in math, my grades were still only 90, 95, or 93.
这里的“whatever I was hard to math”结构不正确，应该用“whatever I found hard in math”来表达“我觉得数学难的部分”。“hard”后面需要介词短语来说明难的对象。
× So first of all, I think the challenge in life can make our willpower more bigger and stronger.
✓ So first of all, I think the challenge in life can make our willpower bigger and stronger.
“more bigger”是错误的比较级用法，比较级“bigger”本身已经包含“more”的意思，不能叠加使用。
× And secondly, the challenging life can also help us to aid the ability of taking many different risks.
✓ And secondly, the challenging life can also help us improve the ability to take many different risks.
“help us to aid the ability of taking”结构不自然且错误，应改为“help us improve the ability to take”，更符合英语表达习惯。
× So, uh, every time I make challenges, first of all, I will cry, uh, cry a lot.
✓ So, uh, every time I face challenges, first of all, I will cry, uh, cry a lot.
“make challenges”用法不正确，应该用“face challenges”表示“面对挑战”。
× And, but after I cry, uh, I will, I will, I will, I will do things very well because I, I know I have to do this.
✓ But after I cry, uh, I will do things very well because I know I have to do this.
句中重复使用“and, but”和多次“I will”显得冗余，应简化为“but after I cry, I will do things very well”。
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