Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về địa điểm, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I and my family' nên là 'my family and I'. Nên thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: My family and I went to Ha Long Bay for our last holiday, and it was an exciting experience because we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and boat trips.

제안: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn, tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'greatest'.

예시: Yes, I love holidays because they allow me to create wonderful memories with my family and relax from daily stress.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngắt quãng, lặp từ. Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về ngày lễ công cộng yêu thích và giải thích lý do cụ thể, tránh nhầm lẫn địa điểm và chủ đề.

예시: My favorite public holiday is the National Day because I usually go to the beach for swimming and relaxation with my family.

제안: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh ngắt quãng. Nên thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc và chi tiết hơn về hoạt động trong kỳ nghỉ.

예시: During holidays, my family and I often eat together, and in my free time, I enjoy going swimming.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'your day' thành 'my day' và dùng số nhiều cho 'books'. Nên dùng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I like spending my day at home because I can learn English and read books, which makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc đúng và bổ sung lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I enjoy relaxing and feeling comfortable during my free time.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không chính xác. Cần trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, sử dụng thì đúng.

예시: I prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy fun activities with my family, which makes the experience very enjoyable.

× The last holiday I and my family went to the Harlong Guanglin and it is very exciting.

✓ The last holiday my family and I went to Harlong Guanglin and it was very exciting.

The phrase 'I and my family' is incorrect; the correct order is 'my family and I'. Also, 'Harlong Guanglin' should not have 'the' before it as it is a proper noun. 'It is very exciting' should be in past tense 'it was very exciting' because the holiday happened in the past.

× Oh yes, I love holidays because it gives me. A lot of memories with my family and I think holiday it is greatest for me.

✓ Oh yes, I love holidays because they give me a lot of memories with my family and I think holidays are the greatest for me.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also, 'holiday it is greatest' is incorrect; it should be 'holidays are the greatest'. The sentence structure is corrected to match plural subject and verb agreement.

× Or because I, I think I like going to Harlem, Guangdong the best. Because I like swimming. And in my opinion, I, I, I like, uh, I like beach.

✓ Because I think I like going to Harlem, Guangdong the best because I like swimming. And in my opinion, I like the beach.

The phrase 'I like beach' is incorrect; 'beach' is a singular noun and needs an article 'the' to be correct. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and fluency.

× I uh, and my family often eating together and. In my free time, I go to swimming.

✓ My family and I often eat together. In my free time, I go swimming.

The phrase 'my family often eating' is incorrect; it should be 'my family often eat' or 'my family and I often eat'. Also, 'go to swimming' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go swimming' without 'to'.

× Yes, I like spending your day at home and I learn English and read book. It is very comfortable for me and I feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like spending my day at home and I learn English and read books. It is very comfortable for me and I feel relaxed.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect when referring to oneself; it should be 'my'. Also, 'read book' should be plural 'read books' to be grammatically correct.

× I like prefer a leisurely better because I I think I like relaxing and comfortable. Well, I I like it.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I think I like relaxing and being comfortable. Well, I like it.

The phrase 'I like prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone is sufficient. Also, 'relaxing and comfortable' should be 'relaxing and being comfortable' to maintain parallel structure. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× I think I like prefer an exciting holiday better because I like exciting and comfortable because I am went to the holiday with my family and I very love it.

✓ I think I prefer an exciting holiday better because I like excitement and comfort. I went on holiday with my family and I really loved it.

The phrase 'I am went' is incorrect; the past tense 'went' should be used alone. 'I very love it' is incorrect; it should be 'I really loved it'. Also, 'like exciting and comfortable' is corrected to 'like excitement and comfort' for proper noun usage.