Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question by stating where you went or what you did during your last holiday. Use clear and concise sentences, avoid redundancy, and correct grammar mistakes. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: My last holiday was during the Chinese New Year in Taiwan. It is one of the biggest festivals here, and people usually gather to have dinner and enjoy each other's company, which creates a harmonious atmosphere.

제안: Your answer expresses your feelings well but is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

예시: I enjoy holidays because they allow people to gather, share stories, and have fun together. I really appreciate these moments of connection and happiness.

제안: Your answer covers the main idea but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Try to use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and use linking words to make your answer clearer and more coherent.

예시: I like two public holidays the most: Christmas and Chinese New Year. Both holidays are special because people gather to share their feelings and stories, spending quality time together.

제안: Your answer is quite long and contains unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words and avoid redundancy. Also, be specific about what you do during holidays.

예시: During holidays, I usually help my family prepare for gatherings. I also enjoy talking with family members, watching TV, and playing games with them. These activities are some of my favorites.

제안: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

예시: I am an outdoor person, so I usually prefer not to spend my day at home. I enjoy bonding with others and meeting new people because I am curious about them.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using simple and correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer both leisurely and busy holidays. Leisurely holidays give me time to relax and spend quality time with my family, while busy holidays allow us to work together and bond more through conversations and shared activities.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and confusing phrases. Try to clearly express your preference and support it with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer exciting holidays, such as Christmas, because there are many gifts and fun activities. I also enjoy sharing funny and exciting stories with my family during this time.

× Chinese New Year is one of the most biggest festival in Taiwan.

✓ Chinese New Year is one of the biggest festivals in Taiwan.

The phrase 'most biggest' is incorrect because 'biggest' is already a superlative adjective and does not need 'most'. Also, 'festival' should be plural 'festivals' because it refers to one among many.

× People will gather around and and have dinner and talking to each other is one of harmony.

✓ People will gather around, have dinner, and talk to each other in harmony.

The sentence has repeated 'and' and incorrect verb forms. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to maintain parallel structure with 'have dinner'. Also, 'is one of harmony' is unclear and corrected to 'in harmony' for clarity.

× share each other story

✓ share each other's stories

The phrase 'each other story' is incorrect; it should be possessive 'each other's' and 'story' should be plural 'stories' to indicate multiple stories shared.

× that's more one of the most beautiful thing I really like about it

✓ that's one of the most beautiful things I really like about it

The phrase 'more one of the most beautiful thing' is incorrect. It should be 'one of the most beautiful things' to correctly express one item among many.

× both of the holiday like people can gather around

✓ both of the holidays where people can gather around

'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' because it refers to two holidays. Also, adding 'where' improves sentence clarity.

× share their feeling to each other and and also story

✓ share their feelings with each other and also stories

'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' and the preposition 'to' should be 'with'. 'story' should be plural 'stories'.

× just spend quality time with him and that is one of the two holiday I like the best.

✓ just spend quality time with them and that is one of the two holidays I like the best.

'him' is incorrect pronoun here; 'them' refers to people generally. 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays'.

× helping out my family prepare for stuff for the upcoming families member

✓ helping out my family prepare stuff for the upcoming family members

'prepare for stuff for the upcoming families member' is incorrect. It should be 'prepare stuff for the upcoming family members' to correctly use prepositions and plural forms.

× talk with my fam, other family members or just watching TV or talk with them, chat with him and and also playing game with him.

✓ talk with my family and other family members, watch TV, talk with them, chat with them, and also play games with them.

'fam' is informal and unclear; 'family' is better. 'him' is incorrect pronoun; 'them' is appropriate for multiple people. Verb forms should be consistent.

× I'm outdoor person, so I'm not really like to spend my day at home

✓ I'm an outdoor person, so I don't really like to spend my day at home

Missing article 'an' before 'outdoor person'. Also, 'I'm not really like' is incorrect; correct form is 'I don't really like'.

× I'm a person who prefer both not only because of the sureties give me the time to spend some quality time with my family members

✓ I'm a person who prefers both, not only because the sureties give me time to spend quality time with my family members

Subject-verb agreement: 'who prefer' should be 'who prefers'. 'because of the sureties' is unclear; 'because the sureties' is better. 'give me the time' can be simplified to 'give me time'.

× that is one of the two holiday I like the best.

✓ that is one of the two holidays I like the best.

'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' because it refers to two holidays.

× there will be a lot of prison that you can you can get and you can get excited

✓ there will be a lot of presents that you can get and get excited about

'prison' is a wrong word; it should be 'presents'. Also, 'you can get excited' needs 'about' to complete the phrase.