Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: I went to Suzhou for my last holiday. It is a beautiful city in China. Unfortunately, it rained on the first day, so that day was not very enjoyable.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并解释原因。

예시: I don't like holidays very much because I had to attend extra classes during holidays when I was in school.

제안: 表达基本清楚，但句子略显生硬，建议丰富细节并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I like the Spring Festival best because it brings family members together to celebrate and marks the beginning of a new year.

제안: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法错误严重，建议使用正确时态并清晰表达假期活动。

예시: Usually, I attend extra classes during holidays. If I am not busy with studies, I like to travel.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不够自然，建议使用完整句子并增加细节说明。

예시: Yes, I like spending my days at home because I can relax and do many different activities there.

제안: 表达有些重复且语法不准确，建议简化表达并使用更自然的句子。

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I dislike being busy and stressed. Holidays should be a time to relax.

제안: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。

예시: It depends on how I feel. If I am very tired, I prefer a peaceful holiday. However, if I have been looking forward to the holiday for a long time, I prefer an exciting one.

× I went to Suzhou, which is a very beautiful city in China, but the first day we went arrived in Suzhou, it started to rain and so it's not a very good memory.

✓ I went to Suzhou, which is a very beautiful city in China, but on the first day we arrived in Suzhou, it started to rain, so it wasn't a very good memory.

句中“we went arrived”时态混用，应使用过去时“arrived”。另外，“it's not a very good memory”应改为过去时“wasn't”，因为描述的是过去的经历。建议注意时态一致性，描述过去事件时使用过去时。

× So I don't really like holidays because in the past my holidays were was filled up with the crime school for my grade so I didn't like holidays before.

✓ So I don't really like holidays because in the past my holidays were filled up with the cram school for my grade, so I didn't like holidays before.

句中“were was”重复，应选用正确的过去时“were”。另外，“crime school”应为“cram school”，是拼写错误。建议注意动词时态和拼写准确。

× I like Spring Festival best because the Spring Festival is a festival that can improve the family reunion and start a new year.

✓ I like the Spring Festival best because it is a festival that brings family reunion and starts a new year.

“improve the family reunion”用词不当，应改为“brings family reunion”更符合表达习惯。建议注意介词和动词搭配的正确使用。

× Usually I went to the crime school and if my study didn't busy I will go for a journey. Or I just started.

✓ Usually I go to the cram school, and if my studies aren't busy, I will go on a trip. Or I just started.

“went”应改为一般现在时“go”，因为描述习惯性动作；“didn't busy”语法错误，应为“aren't busy”；“crime school”应为“cram school”；“go for a journey”习惯表达为“go on a trip”。建议注意时态和固定搭配。

× Usually I went to the crime school and if my study didn't busy I will go for a journey. Or I just started.

✓ Usually I go to the cram school, and if my studies aren't busy, I will go on a trip. Or I just started.

“go for a journey”中的介词“for”用法不当，应为“go on a trip”。建议学习常用短语的正确介词搭配。

× Yes, I like, I think I'll spend my day at home, can relax and I also have a variety of activities can do in my home so.

✓ Yes, I like it. I think I'll spend my day at home to relax, and I also have a variety of activities I can do at home.

句中缺少主语“it”，动词不完整，且“can do in my home”表达不自然，应为“I can do at home”。建议注意句子完整性和介词使用。

× I like a leisurely holiday because I hate the business and the urgency thing. So if the holiday is busy, why this holiday appear? Holiday is for relax.

✓ I like a leisurely holiday because I hate busyness and urgent things. So if the holiday is busy, why does this holiday exist? Holiday is for relaxation.

“business”误用，应为“busyness”；“urgency thing”表达不当，应为“urgent things”；“why this holiday appear”缺少助动词，应为“why does this holiday exist”；“Holiday is for relax”应为“Holiday is for relaxation”。建议注意词性和句子结构。

× I like a leisurely holiday because I hate the business and the urgency thing. So if the holiday is busy, why this holiday appear? Holiday is for relax.

✓ I like a leisurely holiday because I hate busyness and urgent things. So if the holiday is busy, why does this holiday exist? Holiday is for relaxation.

“the business and the urgency thing”中的冠词和名词搭配不当，应去掉“the”或改为复数形式。建议注意冠词和名词的搭配。

× It depends on my state. If I'm very tired, I like a peaceful holiday. But if this holiday is a holiday that I anticipate for a long time, I prefer an exciting holiday.

✓ It depends on my condition. If I'm very tired, I like a peaceful holiday. But if this holiday is one that I have anticipated for a long time, I prefer an exciting holiday.

“state”用词不当，应为“condition”；“anticipate”应使用现在完成时“have anticipated”，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。建议注意词汇选择和时态使用。