Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且信息表达不够清晰。建议注意地名的正确表达，避免重复和语法错误，同时使句子更流畅自然。

예시: I went to Beihai last time, which is a beautiful city located in the northern part of China, in Shandong province. We chose to go there to escape the extreme weather.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，如'instruct you time'不合适。建议使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

예시: Yes, I definitely like holidays. As a university student, I look forward to holidays because I can manage my own time and do whatever I enjoy without the pressure of classes.

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如'there is no too much population'。建议使用更地道的表达，并且注意句子流畅。

예시: As a student, I prefer the summer holiday because it is mainly for students and teachers. Also, popular tourist spots are less crowded, so I can travel comfortably and take photos.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如'you don't need to fear of the attendance to your class'。建议使用更准确的表达，并且句子更简洁。

예시: I usually enjoy my holidays by traveling because I don't have to worry about attending classes, and I have plenty of time to plan my trips, which makes them enjoyable.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如'It decided by the weather'。建议使用更自然的表达，并且注意句子连贯。

예시: It depends on the weather. If the weather is bad and not suitable for traveling, I prefer to stay at home, play video games, turn on the air conditioner, and browse apps like WeChat and TikTok.

제안: 回答较为自然且结构清晰，但可以增加一些具体细节使内容更丰富。建议在表达原因时加入具体例子。

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and spend quality time on activities I enjoy, such as reading or hiking. When holidays are too busy, I often feel stressed and can't fully enjoy my time.

제안: 回答表达有些不自然，如'It's like the pale in these colors'不清楚。建议使用更清晰的比喻或直接表达，并注意语法。

예시: I prefer an exciting holiday because my weekdays are usually calm and routine. An exciting holiday helps me recharge and refresh my mind, so I can enjoy the following week more.

× I went to be high last time.

✓ I went to Beihai last time.

这里“be high”是错误的地名拼写，应为“Beihai”，是中国北部的一个城市名称。

× It's really a nice city in north part of China which located in Shandong province and we go, we went to there to avoid the extreme weather.

✓ It's really a nice city in the northern part of China, which is located in Shandong province, and we went there to avoid the extreme weather.

“in north part”应为“in the northern part”，需要定冠词和形容词形式；“which located”缺少系动词“is”；“we go, we went to there”时态混乱且“to there”错误，应为“we went there”。

× Yes, obviously, as a university student, I always dream of holiday, because on that day you can instruct you time, the whole day, you can do everything you want.

✓ Yes, obviously, as a university student, I always dream of holidays, because on those days you can manage your time; the whole day, you can do everything you want.

“dream of holiday”应为复数“holidays”；“instruct you time”用词错误，应为“manage your time”；“on that day”应为复数“on those days”，因为假期通常不止一天。

× You don't need to suffer from pressure from the class.

✓ You don't need to suffer from pressure from classes.

“pressure from the class”表达不自然，通常说“pressure from classes”表示来自课程的压力。

× As a student, I will choose summer holiday because summer holiday is holiday only for students and teachers.

✓ As a student, I will choose the summer holiday because the summer holiday is a holiday only for students and teachers.

“summer holiday”前应加定冠词“the”，且第二个“holiday”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示特指和泛指。

× There is no too much population on the landscape, so I can travel to there and take selfies.

✓ There is not too much population in the area, so I can travel there and take selfies.

“no too much”用法错误，应为“not too much”；“on the landscape”应为“in the area”更自然；“travel to there”应为“travel there”。

× I usually enjoy my holiday by traveling 'cause you don't need to fear of the attendance to your class and you have full time to manage which makes you trip enjoyable.

✓ I usually enjoy my holiday by traveling because you don't need to fear missing your classes and you have full time to manage, which makes your trip enjoyable.

“fear of the attendance to your class”表达错误，应为“fear missing your classes”；“'cause”应写为“because”更正式；“you trip”应为“your trip”。

× It decided by the weather because sometimes the weather is really bad which is not suitable for traveling.

✓ It is decided by the weather because sometimes the weather is really bad, which is not suitable for traveling.

缺少系动词“is”；句子需要逗号分隔从句。

× So I will try to stay at home, play video games, open my air conditioner and rotate from several apps like WeChat and Tiktok.

✓ So I will try to stay at home, play video games, turn on my air conditioner, and browse several apps like WeChat and TikTok.

“open my air conditioner”应为“turn on my air conditioner”；“rotate from several apps”表达错误，应为“browse several apps”；“Tiktok”应为“TikTok”。

× I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and spend quality time on activities I enjoy.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and spend quality time on activities that I enjoy.

缺少关系代词“that”，使句子更完整。

× When the holidays are too busy, I often get stressful and cannot enjoy my time very well.

✓ When the holidays are too busy, I often get stressed and cannot enjoy my time very well.

“get stressful”错误，应为“get stressed”，因为“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人。

× I prefer an exciting holiday because our weekdays are so peaceful.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday because our weekdays are so peaceful.

该句无明显语法错误。

× It's like the pale in these colors.

✓ It's like the pale in these colors.

该句表达不清，可能是“It's like the pale among these colors.”，但原句语法错误较多，建议重写。

× So an exciting holiday can charge our battery and refresh our brain, which helps us to enjoy next week.

✓ So an exciting holiday can recharge our batteries and refresh our brains, which helps us enjoy the next week.

“charge our battery”应为“recharge our batteries”；“refresh our brain”应为“refresh our brains”；“helps us to enjoy next week”应为“helps us enjoy the next week”。