Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'these famous place' nên là 'famous places' và câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Last holiday, I went to Danang City with my family because we wanted to relax by the beach. We spent most of our time visiting famous places like the Marble Mountains and enjoying delicious local foods.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như 'holiday have we relax'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết.

예시: Yes, definitely. I really enjoy holidays because they allow me to relax and feel more comfortable compared to working.

제안: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn để thể hiện ý rõ ràng.

예시: Honestly, I prefer private holidays to public ones because I can spend quality time with my family without crowds or noise. For instance, during these holidays, we usually have small gatherings at home and cook special meals together.

제안: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'most happier' nên là 'happier'. Ngoài ra, có thể dùng thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: To be honest, I usually spend most of my holidays with my family because I feel happier and more comfortable at home. I enjoy relaxing and bonding with them, which helps me recharge after a busy week. For example, we often watch movies together or cook special meals.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng phần 'Suggest shooting or watching movie' không rõ ràng và không tự nhiên. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, absolutely. I enjoy spending my day at home because it provides a comfortable and relaxing environment where I can focus on my hobbies, such as shooting videos or watching movies. Moreover, being at home allows me to spend quality time with my family.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'prefer a leisurely to busy holiday' và câu nói lặp lại không cần thiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday rather than a busy one because I think holidays are a time to relax and feel refreshed.

제안: Bạn có một số lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như 'bar barrios' không đúng và câu chưa rõ nghĩa. Hãy dùng từ chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I would prefer a peaceful holiday rather than an exciting one. After a busy and stressful period, I find that a calm and relaxing environment helps me recharge more effectively. For example, spending time in the quiet countryside.

× We spent most of our time with these famous place like the Marble Mountains and enjoy delicious local foods.

✓ We spent most of our time at these famous places like the Marble Mountains and enjoyed delicious local foods.

The phrase 'these famous place' is incorrect because 'these' is plural but 'place' is singular. It should be 'these famous places' to match plural. Also, 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past tense context of the sentence.

× I'm a big fan of holiday because you know that holiday have we relax and feel better and comfortable than working.

✓ I'm a big fan of holidays because you know that holidays help us relax and feel better and more comfortable than working.

The word 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to refer generally. Also, 'have we relax' is incorrect; it should be 'help us relax' to express the function of holidays. 'More comfortable' is needed to compare properly.

× For example, during these holidays we usually have a small gathering at home, cook special meals.

✓ For example, during these holidays we usually have a small gathering at home and cook special meals.

The sentence is missing a conjunction 'and' to connect the two actions 'have a small gathering' and 'cook special meals' properly.

× To be honest, all my holidays I usually spend most of my time with my family because I feel most happier and more comfortable at home.

✓ To be honest, during all my holidays I usually spend most of my time with my family because I feel happier and more comfortable at home.

The phrase 'most happier' is incorrect; 'happier' is the comparative form and does not need 'most'. Also, 'all my holidays' should be preceded by 'during' to indicate time.

× Suggest shooting or watching movie.

✓ I enjoy shooting or watching movies.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence with subject 'I' and verb 'enjoy'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to generalize the activity.

× I prefer a leisurely to busy holiday, but yeah, you know, that holiday I think is a time for people to relax and feel better.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday to a busy holiday, but yeah, you know, that holiday is a time for people to relax and feel better.

The phrase 'a leisurely to busy holiday' is missing the article 'a' before 'busy holiday' to parallel the structure. Also, 'that holiday I think is' should be 'that holiday is' for clarity and correct word order.

× I would prefer a beautiful holiday over an exciting one. After a busy and stressful bar barrios, I find that a calm and relaxing environment help me restart and more effectively.

✓ I would prefer a peaceful holiday over an exciting one. After a busy and stressful period, I find that a calm and relaxing environment helps me restart more effectively.

'Beautiful holiday' is less appropriate than 'peaceful holiday' in this context. 'Bar barrios' seems to be a typo and should be 'period'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'environment'. Also, 'and more effectively' should be 'more effectively' without 'and'.