Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and detailed. You can add why it was fun or what activities you did there to enrich your response.

예시: I went to Zimmer Province with my family for my last holiday. We enjoyed visiting beautiful places and trying local food, which made the trip very enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I like holidays because they are fun and I enjoy spending time with my family and friends.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Please clearly state which public holiday you like and explain why, using specific details.

예시: My favorite public holiday is the Water Festival because I enjoy watching the boat races and celebrating with my community.

제안: Improve your grammar and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific details about what you do during holidays.

예시: During holidays, I usually spend time with my family and we go on trips to explore new places together.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and adding reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I like spending my day at home because it is peaceful and I can relax without any distractions.

제안: Your answer is too short. Try to explain why you prefer a busy holiday and give examples to support your opinion.

예시: I prefer a busy holiday because I enjoy visiting many places and trying different activities during my trip.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to explain your preference clearly and use correct grammar.

예시: I prefer an exciting holiday because it allows me to have fun and enjoy memorable moments with my family.

× Yes I do I like holiday because his house many fun and enjoy enjoy spending time with family or friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I like holidays because there is a lot of fun and I enjoy spending time with family or friends.

The word 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the general statement. 'His house many fun' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a lot of fun' to express existence and quantity properly. Also, 'enjoy enjoy' is a repetition error; only one 'enjoy' is needed.

× My best public holiday is somewhere else program is the best. I never forgot the trip.

✓ My favorite public holiday is the 'Somewhere Else' program. I will never forget the trip.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Somewhere else program is the best' is confusing; it should be rephrased to specify the program name. 'I never forgot' is incorrect tense; 'I will never forget' fits better for expressing lasting memory.

× On my holiday especially, I spending time with my family and enjoy enjoying the trip with them.

✓ On my holiday, especially, I spend time with my family and enjoy the trip with them.

The verb 'spending' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb; it should be 'I spend'. Also, 'enjoy enjoying' is redundant; only 'enjoy' is needed before 'the trip'.

× I prefer an exciting holiday because I feel like relax and enjoy with family.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday because I feel relaxed and enjoy time with my family.

'Feel like relax' is incorrect; it should be 'feel relaxed' to use the adjective form. Also, 'enjoy with family' is incomplete; it should be 'enjoy time with my family' for clarity.