Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và chia động từ đúng.

예시: For my last holiday, I traveled to my hometown and stayed there for one month.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và hoàn chỉnh câu. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ.

예시: Yes, I really like holidays because they give me plenty of free time to relax after a busy period.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều tiếng ừ, ờ làm gián đoạn câu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích ngày lễ đó.

예시: My favorite public holiday is the beach holiday because it has a relaxing summer vibe.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích cụ thể những hoạt động bạn làm trong kỳ nghỉ.

예시: During holidays, I like to visit different places to relax and recharge myself.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy spending my day at home because I can do activities I like, such as singing, dancing, reading books, and making handmade souvenirs, which makes me feel comfortable.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ đúng nghĩa. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ nhẹ nhàng hoặc bận rộn.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I work a lot and feel tired from my job and assignments.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ yên bình.

예시: I prefer a peaceful holiday rather than an exciting one because I enjoy a slow lifestyle and want to relax after busy times.

× The my last holiday I was travel my hometown.

✓ My last holiday, I traveled to my hometown.

The use of 'The my last holiday' is incorrect because 'the' and 'my' cannot be used together before a noun. Also, 'was travel' is incorrect; the past tense 'traveled' should be used here.

× I was travel my hometown.

✓ I traveled to my hometown.

The verb 'travel' should be in the past tense 'traveled' to match the past time frame indicated by 'last holiday'.

× Yes, it's a third holiday.

✓ Yes, it was my third holiday.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct tense. 'It's' (it is) should be 'it was' to match past tense, and 'a third holiday' should be 'my third holiday' to indicate possession.

× I I turn, turn.

✓ I returned.

The phrase 'I I turn, turn' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'I returned'.

× I return my hometown one month.

✓ I returned to my hometown for one month.

The verb 'return' should be in past tense 'returned'. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed after 'returned', and 'for one month' clarifies the duration.

× Sure, I very like holidays because in this time I can I can have many spare time and I can I can relax after after a time so busy and.

✓ Sure, I really like holidays because during this time I can have a lot of spare time and relax after a busy period.

'Very like' is incorrect; 'really like' is appropriate. 'In this time' should be 'during this time'. 'Many spare time' is incorrect; 'a lot of spare time' is correct. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× I can I can have many spare time and I can I can relax after after a time so busy and.

✓ I can have a lot of spare time and relax after a busy period.

'After after a time so busy' is incorrect; it should be 'after a busy period' to express the idea properly.

× Uh, the public, uh, holiday I uh, like best is umm, beach, uh, sea, uh, because, uh, it's so summer vibe and.

✓ The public holiday I like best is the beach holiday because it has such a summer vibe.

'It's so summer vibe' is incorrect; it should be 'it has such a summer vibe'. Also, 'beach, sea' is unclear; 'beach holiday' is more appropriate.

× On holiday I visit many many actress.

✓ On holidays, I visit many places.

'Many many actress' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the student meant 'many places' or 'many attractions'.

× I want many actress I want to go after, relax and relax and push myself.

✓ I want to visit many places to relax and refresh myself.

'I want many actress' is incorrect; 'actress' is a person, not a place. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I like spending my day at home because I want to do I want to do anything I like such as sing, dance, reading, book, handmade souvenir and I I comfortable for this.

✓ Yes, I like spending my day at home because I can do anything I like such as singing, dancing, reading books, making handmade souvenirs, and I feel comfortable doing this.

'I want to do I want to do anything' is repetitive and incorrect. Gerunds are needed after 'such as'. 'I I comfortable for this' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel comfortable doing this'.

× I prefer legendary because because I because I I work so many and I'm so tired for work, for job, for assignment and.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I work a lot and I'm very tired from work, my job, and assignments.

'Legendary' is incorrect; the correct word is 'leisurely'. 'I work so many' is incorrect; 'I work a lot' is correct. 'Tired for work' should be 'tired from work'.

× I like peaceful holiday than exciting holiday because I I love I love slowly lifestyle and I want a relax after busy time and I think I love howling.

✓ I like peaceful holidays more than exciting holidays because I love a slow lifestyle and want to relax after busy times. I think I love howling.

'Slowly lifestyle' should be 'slow lifestyle'. 'I want a relax' should be 'I want to relax'. 'Peaceful holiday than exciting holiday' should be 'peaceful holidays more than exciting holidays'. The last sentence 'I think I love howling' is unclear but left as is.