Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。文を簡潔にし、過去形の使い方を正しくしましょう。また、具体的な情報を加えると良いです。

예시: I went to Australia for my last holiday. It was my second time visiting there, and I really enjoyed the experience.

제안: 文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。理由を明確にし、簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I like holidays because they give me a chance to travel abroad and relax for a long time.

제안: 話が途中で終わっているように感じられます。理由や経験をもっと具体的に述べ、文を完結させましょう。

예시: I like summer holidays best because as a college student, I have a long break. Last summer, I went to Australia where it was winter and quite cold, which was an interesting experience.

제안: 意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。文法と語彙を正しく使い、具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: I usually travel abroad during holidays. I love traveling alone by airplane to explore new places.

제안: 文が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に表現する練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I like spending time at home because it helps me relax, but I also enjoy going outside sometimes.

제안: 単語の誤りや文法の問題があります。好みをはっきり述べ、理由を添えて説明しましょう。

예시: I prefer busy holidays because I like going outside and doing many activities during my free time.

제안: 表現が不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、正しい表現を使いましょう。

예시: I prefer exciting holidays because they create memorable experiences that I can remember for a long time.

× And I went.

✓ I went.

The sentence starts with 'And' which is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete. Starting a sentence with 'And' in formal speech is generally avoided. Simply saying 'I went.' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I went Australia last holiday, last I have.

✓ I went to Australia last holiday, and I have been there twice.

The verb 'went' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. Also, the phrase 'last I have' is unclear and incorrect. It should be rephrased to indicate the number of visits, e.g., 'I have been there twice.'

× Visited visited Australia twice.

✓ I have visited Australia twice.

The sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb. Repeating 'Visited' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I have visited Australia twice.' to indicate experience.

× That's because holidays is very very enjoyable for me and I like trip.

✓ That's because holidays are very enjoyable for me and I like trips.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'trip' should be plural 'trips' to match the context of liking traveling in general.

× I like traveling abroad, so the trip need a long vacation, so I like holidays.

✓ I like traveling abroad, so trips need a long vacation, so I like holidays.

'Trip' should be plural 'trips' to generalize the statement. Also, 'need' should agree with plural subject 'trips'.

× I like summer vacation, summer holiday, Yeah, and I'm a college student.

✓ I like summer vacation and summer holidays. Yeah, I'm a college student.

The phrase is repetitive and lacks proper conjunctions. 'Summer vacation and summer holidays' is clearer. Also, 'Yeah' should be separated properly.

× The college has a lot of a long, long holiday, so I like summer holiday.

✓ The college has a lot of long holidays, so I like summer holidays.

'A lot of a long, long holiday' is incorrect. It should be 'a lot of long holidays' to indicate multiple holidays.

× Australia is is winter, so very cold.

✓ In Australia, it is winter, so it is very cold.

The sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and structure. 'Australia is is winter' is incorrect; it should be 'In Australia, it is winter'.

× It was very.

✓ It was very cold.

The sentence is incomplete. 'It was very' needs an adjective to complete the meaning, such as 'cold'.

× I usually go to Chicago abroad.

✓ I usually go abroad to Chicago.

The phrase 'go to Chicago abroad' is awkward. The correct prepositional phrase is 'go abroad to Chicago'.

× I love traveling so and I love a lot, so I took airplane and alone go along the upload.

✓ I love traveling a lot, so I took an airplane and went alone on the trip.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I love traveling so and I love a lot' is redundant. 'Took airplane and alone go along the upload' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'took an airplane and went alone on the trip.'

× Yes I do and I like go outside and also I also like in spend my home spend at my home just because it is barely relax and it makes me relax and very very good for me.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to go outside, and I also like to spend time at home because it is relaxing and makes me feel very good.

The sentence has multiple prepositional errors and awkward phrasing. 'Like go outside' should be 'like to go outside'. 'Like in spend my home spend at my home' is incorrect; it should be 'like to spend time at home'. 'Barely relax' is incorrect; 'relaxing' is appropriate.

× I like Brizzy holiday.

✓ I like busy holidays.

'Brizzy' is not a correct word. The intended word is likely 'busy'. Also, 'holiday' should be plural to match the context.

× I'm I like go outside in holidays.

✓ I like to go outside during holidays.

The sentence is ungrammatical and redundant. 'I'm I like go outside' should be 'I like to go outside'. 'In holidays' is better expressed as 'during holidays'.

× So there yeah, I used to be busy holiday, so I want to spend busy holidays.

✓ So yes, I am used to busy holidays, so I want to spend busy holidays.

'Used to be busy holiday' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'used to busy holidays'. Also, 'there yeah' is informal and unclear.

× And I prefer an exciting holiday.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday.

Starting the sentence with 'And' is unnecessary and informal. Removing it makes the sentence clearer.

× It's because excited holiday is more re remember.

✓ It's because an exciting holiday is more memorable.

'Excited holiday' is incorrect; the adjective should be 'exciting'. 'More re remember' is incorrect; the correct word is 'more memorable'.

× Yeah, I can remember excited holiday.

✓ Yeah, I can remember an exciting holiday.

The adjective 'excited' is incorrect; it should be 'exciting'. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'exciting holiday'.

× So I prefer barely enjoy holiday.

✓ So I prefer a holiday that I can really enjoy.

'Barely enjoy holiday' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'a holiday that I can really enjoy'.