Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details about Mustang. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'everyone there is tribunal'.

예시: I went to Mustang for my last holiday. It is a beautiful region located in Nepal, known for its Tibetan culture and stunning landscapes. I enjoyed exploring the traditional villages and experiencing the local customs.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more natural. Use proper vocabulary and sentence structure. Explain why holidays are important with specific reasons and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I like holidays because they help me relax and take a break from work. Holidays are important to refresh the mind and reduce stress from a busy schedule.

제안: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific details about Tihar and why you like it. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: My favorite public holiday in my country is Tihar. During this festival, the government gives us 15 days off. It is a wonderful time to celebrate with family, exchange gifts, and spend quality time together.

제안: Your answer should be more organized and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'yeah, it's me'. Provide specific activities you do on holidays.

예시: On holidays, I usually have lunch with my family and spend time with friends. I also visit nearby villages to see my grandparents, which I really enjoy.

제안: Your answer needs to be more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Explain clearly why you like staying at home with specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I enjoy spending my day at home because I am a homebody. I like having quiet time to relax and reflect without any noise or distractions.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Please provide a clear topic sentence and explain why you prefer a leisurely holiday with specific reasons. Avoid confusing phrases like 'such a hat trick'.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and spend quality time with my family. Busy holidays can be stressful, so I like to take it slow and enjoy peaceful moments.

제안: Your answer should be more concise and structured. Clearly state your preference and explain why. Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity.

예시: I like both exciting and peaceful holidays. Exciting trips are fun and energizing, but I also value peaceful holidays where I can relax and clear my mind.

× Mustang is one of the beautiful place where located in Nepal and it's a Tibetan place.

✓ Mustang is one of the beautiful places located in Nepal and it's a Tibetan place.

The word 'place' should be plural 'places' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

× Everyone there is tribunal and.

✓ Everyone there is Tibetan.

The word 'tribunal' is incorrect here; the correct adjective to describe the people is 'Tibetan'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× Yes of course I like holiday because holidays are refreshment and and work release relief day so and so important for us to go on a holiday to freeze our mind and form the hectic.

✓ Yes, of course I like holidays because holidays are refreshing and a work release relief day, so they are very important for us to go on a holiday to free our mind from the hectic.

The word 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the context. Also, 'refreshment' should be 'refreshing' (adjective), and 'freeze' should be 'free'. This involves singular/plural issues and incorrect adjective use.

× Mustang is one of the beautiful place where located in Nepal and it's a Tibetan place.

✓ Mustang is one of the beautiful places located in Nepal and it's a Tibetan place.

The phrase 'where located in Nepal' is incorrect; it should be 'located in Nepal' without 'where'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× A public holiday I like base in my country it's the say Tihar where government give us 15 days holidays.

✓ A public holiday I like based in my country is the festival Tihar where the government gives us 15 days of holidays.

The phrase 'base in my country' should be 'based in my country'. Also, 'government give' should be 'government gives' (subject-verb agreement). '15 days holidays' should be '15 days of holidays'. This involves singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issues.

× where government give us 15 days holidays.

✓ where the government gives us 15 days of holidays.

The subject 'government' is singular and requires the verb 'gives' instead of 'give'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× So it's a beautiful day to celebrate our holiday with our families and share our gift with each other and spend time and meet.

✓ So it's a beautiful day to celebrate our holiday with our families, share our gifts with each other, spend time, and meet.

The phrase 'share our gift with each other' should be 'share our gifts with each other' (plural). Also, the sentence needs commas to separate actions properly. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure issue.

× On holiday I usually go for lunch with my family and spend time with my family and friends.

✓ On holidays, I usually go for lunch with my family and spend time with my family and friends.

The phrase 'On holiday' should be 'On holidays' to indicate habitual action. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I go for some villages and meet our grandpas and yeah, it's me.

✓ I go to some villages and meet my grandparents, and yeah, that's me.

The phrase 'go for some villages' should be 'go to some villages'. Also, 'our grandpas' should be 'my grandparents' to match the speaker's perspective. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.

× I love to being at home.

✓ I love being at home.

The phrase 'love to being' is incorrect; it should be 'love being'. This is an incorrect use of verb forms.

× So I just love to spend some time with myself and talk with myself without any kind of noisy and from people it's.

✓ So I just love to spend some time by myself and talk to myself without any kind of noise from people.

The phrase 'talk with myself' should be 'talk to myself'. Also, 'noisy' should be 'noise'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and adjectives.

× I prefer leisurely holiday because we need some time for ourself and go alone and spend our ourselves with and with our families.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because we need some time for ourselves, to go alone, and to spend time with our families.

The phrase 'leisurely holiday' needs an article 'a'. 'Ourself' should be 'ourselves'. This is a singular/plural and article usage issue.

× I prefer leisurely holiday because we need some time for ourself and go alone and spend our ourselves with and with our families.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because we need some time for ourselves, to go alone, and to spend time with our families.

The pronouns 'ourself' and 'our ourselves' are incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'ourselves'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.

× We see all this, it's such a hat trick and we don't prefer busy all the day because it's so already we are.

✓ We see all this; it's such a hectic time, and we don't prefer busy days because we are already tired.

The sentence is unclear and has incorrect word usage ('hat trick' instead of 'hectic'). The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and meaning.

× I prefer both kind of holiday because if we are going anywhere and it's make us exciting and and also we prefer I prefer to go peaceful place and peaceful holidays like if we are going anywhere and sit there and peaceful mind is so important.

✓ I prefer both kinds of holidays because if we go anywhere, it makes us excited. Also, I prefer to go to peaceful places and have peaceful holidays because sitting there with a peaceful mind is very important.

The phrase 'both kind of holiday' should be 'both kinds of holidays'. 'Make us exciting' should be 'makes us excited'. 'Go peaceful place' should be 'go to peaceful places'. This involves incorrect use of quantifiers, verb forms, and prepositions.