Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서
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Part 1
시험관
Where did you go for your last holiday?
수험생
I took a trip to Batumi, uh, which is a, a coastal city in uh, Georgia. And this city, umm, is a mix of modern and a historical buildings. Umm, there are uh, there are many umm.
시험관
Do you like holidays? Why?
수험생
I really enjoy spending time in my holiday and I am I'm a big fan of uh, peaceful, uh, holiday because it's a way to uh, unwind and relax and away from Hassan bustle of daily routines.
시험관
Which public holiday do you like best?
수험생
In my country and the longest holiday is a no rules, uh, which is uh, really uh, like it uh, because uh, it uh, is a longest uh, the longest 1 and umm, everything, uh, uh, are new.
시험관
What do you do on holidays?
수험생
I do various things on my holiday such as exploring the nature, trying new cuisines and go to somewhere to unwind and relax.
시험관
Do you like to spend your day at home?
수험생
Honestly, it's my favorite and I really enjoy spending time, uh, in my home and uh, I'm watching TV, uh, studying, and even uh, cooking with my husband. And uh is a cozy place.
시험관
Do you prefer a leisurely or a busy holiday?
수험생
Actually, I am avoid. I try avoid tourist traps and I prefer going somewhere that unexplored and I'm a big fan of peaceful holiday, you know.
시험관
Would you prefer an exciting holiday or a peaceful holiday?
수험생
I prefer a peaceful holiday to exciting a holiday, uh, because, uh, I'm a, uh, really calm person and uh, I'm introverted. Uh, so, uh, it is good, uh, way to uh, go a cozy place and uh.
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총점
Part 1
Where did you go for your last holiday?
점수: 60.0제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, complete your thoughts fully and avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: I took a trip to Batumi, which is a coastal city in Georgia. This city is a mix of modern and historical buildings, and it offers many interesting sights to explore.
Do you like holidays? Why?
점수: 65.0제안: Avoid filler words and try to use more precise vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.
예시: I really enjoy holidays because they allow me to unwind and relax. In particular, I prefer peaceful holidays since they help me escape the busy daily routine.
Which public holiday do you like best?
점수: 40.0제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about the holiday you like. Avoid repetition and filler words.
예시: My favorite public holiday is Nowruz, which is the longest holiday in my country. I like it because it marks the beginning of spring and everything feels fresh and new.
What do you do on holidays?
점수: 70.0제안: Good content but improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid mixing verb forms.
예시: On holidays, I do various activities such as exploring nature, trying new cuisines, and going to places where I can unwind and relax.
Do you like to spend your day at home?
점수: 65.0제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear topic sentence.
예시: Honestly, I prefer spending my days at home because it is a cozy place. I enjoy watching TV, studying, and cooking with my husband.
Do you prefer a leisurely or a busy holiday?
점수: 55.0제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific reasons for your preference.
예시: Actually, I try to avoid tourist traps and prefer going to unexplored places. I am a big fan of peaceful holidays because they help me relax.
Would you prefer an exciting holiday or a peaceful holiday?
점수: 60.0제안: Avoid excessive filler words and improve sentence structure. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words.
예시: I prefer a peaceful holiday rather than an exciting one because I am a calm and introverted person. Therefore, I enjoy going to cozy places to relax.
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