Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about your trip. Avoid redundancy and filler words like 'umm'.

예시: For my last holiday, I went to Dubai with my close friends who are the same age as me. We had a wonderful time exploring the city and enjoying various attractions together.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure.

예시: I like holidays because they give me a chance to relax and explore new places. However, whether I enjoy a holiday depends on my mood and budget. If I have enough money, I prefer to spend time outdoors and visit different cities or countries.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and more accurate vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the holiday.

예시: My favorite public holiday is Nowruz, which is the Persian New Year celebrated in my country. It is a national holiday where families gather to celebrate the beginning of the new year together.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid filler words. Provide specific activities you do during holidays.

예시: During holidays, I usually spend time with my parents and cousins. Sometimes, I go out with my grandparents, and we enjoy eating traditional food and drinking tea together.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use clear sentences and explain your reasons logically with linking words.

예시: Yes, I like to spend my day at home because it is the safest and quietest place. At home, I can relax and feel comfortable, which is very important to me.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Use complete sentences and explain your preference clearly with supporting details.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I am an introverted person. I enjoy quiet activities and peaceful days rather than busy and crowded holidays.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use clear sentence structures and linking words to explain your preferences and reasons.

예시: Sometimes, I prefer an exciting holiday, and other times, I like a peaceful one. It depends on my mood and the people I spend time with. For example, if I am with my parents, I prefer a peaceful holiday.

× The last holiday I tried to go was going to Dubai with my old friends.

✓ The last holiday I tried to go on was going to Dubai with my old friends.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to holidays or trips. Also, 'was going' is awkward here; 'was going to Dubai' is better expressed as 'I tried to go on a holiday to Dubai.' The correction adds the preposition and clarifies the sentence.

× We were same age and there was a very umm stunning and funny time with my friend.

✓ We were the same age and had a very stunning and funny time with my friends.

The phrase 'same age' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'old friends' mentioned earlier. 'There was' is incorrect here; 'had' is better to describe experiencing a good time.

× Umm, didn't that interesting question and, uh, well, I guess it's depend on my, uh, mood and my, uh, budget, you know, if I have enough budget and, uh, incomes, I'll try to spend, spend lots time outdoor and, uh, exploring other city and other countries.

✓ Umm, that's an interesting question and, uh, well, I guess it depends on my, uh, mood and my, uh, budget, you know, if I have enough budget and, uh, income, I'll try to spend lots of time outdoors and, uh, explore other cities and other countries.

'Didn't that interesting question' is incorrect; it should be 'that's an interesting question'. 'It's depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'Incomes' should be singular 'income' in this context. 'Spend lots time' needs 'of' after 'lots'. 'Outdoor' should be 'outdoors' as an adverb. 'Exploring' should be parallel with 'spend', so 'explore' is correct. 'Other city' should be plural 'other cities'.

× The most public holiday I like to spend time is Norius in my country for its nation.

✓ The public holiday I like to spend time on the most is Nowruz in my country because of its national significance.

'The most public holiday' is incorrect; 'the public holiday I like to spend time on the most' is better. 'Norius' is corrected to 'Nowruz'. 'For its nation' is unclear; 'because of its national significance' clarifies the meaning.

× It's a nation holidays and they're celebrated together for starting New Years.

✓ It's a national holiday and it's celebrated together to mark the start of the New Year.

'Nation holidays' should be 'national holiday' (singular). 'They're' refers to plural but 'holiday' is singular, so 'it's' is correct. 'For starting New Years' is awkward; 'to mark the start of the New Year' is clearer.

× I tend to spend lots of time with my parents and my cousins, especially, umm, patron, our cousins and umm, sometimes I tend to go out with my uh, grandparents and uh, eating, uh, eating and drinking some, uh, things.

✓ I tend to spend lots of time with my parents and my cousins, especially our cousins, and sometimes I go out with my grandparents and eat and drink some things.

'Patron' is unclear and likely incorrect; removed for clarity. 'Eating, eating and drinking some things' is repetitive; simplified to 'eat and drink some things'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Actually, yes I do because the last places you will more, uh, feel safely and quiet and be cousin.

✓ Actually, yes I do because at home you will feel safer and quieter and more comfortable.

'The last places' is incorrect; 'at home' is clearer. 'Feel safely' should be 'feel safe' or 'safer' (adjective). 'Quiet' should be comparative 'quieter'. 'Be cousin' is unclear; likely meant 'be comfortable' or 'cozy'.

× There is home. Home is home, you know, and the best.

✓ There is no place like home. Home is home, you know, and the best.

'There is home' is incorrect; the common expression is 'There is no place like home'. This correction improves naturalness and correctness.

× Actually I'm not very interested have a busy holiday because I'm an introverted person and uh, I like to have any quiet things and umm, even quiet days.

✓ Actually, I'm not very interested in having a busy holiday because I'm an introverted person and, uh, I like to have quiet things and, umm, even quiet days.

'Interested have' should be 'interested in having'. 'Any quiet things' is awkward; 'quiet things' is better without 'any' here.

× I'd prefer have an exciting holiday sometimes and sometimes prefer have a peaceful holidays.

✓ I'd prefer to have an exciting holiday sometimes and sometimes prefer to have peaceful holidays.

'Prefer have' should be 'prefer to have'. 'A peaceful holidays' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'holidays'; corrected to 'peaceful holidays' without 'a'.