Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. For example, say 'building sandcastles' instead of 'be like sandcastle'. Also, avoid small grammar mistakes like 'spent most of time' should be 'spent most of the time'.

예시: I went to the beach with my family on my last holiday. I spent most of the time swimming and building sandcastles with my sister, which I really enjoyed because it was both relaxing and fun.

제안: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and plural forms. For example, 'they gives' should be 'they give' and 'Holiday also helped' should be 'Holidays also help'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I really like holidays because they give me a chance to spend quality time with my family, which is very important to me. Moreover, holidays help me to relax and take a break from the stress caused by schoolwork and homework.

제안: Be careful with repetition and spelling. For example, 'My favorite My favorite' is repeated and 'Tiny Year' should be 'Thai New Year'. Also, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, 'people serve it by splashing water' should be 'people celebrate it by splashing water on each other'.

예시: My favorite public holiday is the Thai New Year, also known as Songkran, which takes place from April 13 to 15. During this festive period, people celebrate by splashing water on each other using water guns or visiting their families in other cities.

제안: Use consistent verb tenses and correct subject-verb agreement. For example, 'we enjoy' should be 'we enjoyed' and 'bring back' should be 'brings back'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I usually spend my holidays at the beach near my condo with my family. When I was a kid, we always went there together, and those times were really fun and memorable because we enjoyed swimming and relaxing by the sea. It is a special place that brings back many happy memories for me.

제안: Use correct adjectives and plural forms. For example, 'it's relaxed' should be 'it's relaxing' and 'more experience' should be 'more experiences'. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I enjoy spending time at home because it's relaxing, but I prefer going out with my friends and family to create more enjoyable experiences. Moreover, being outside allows me to explore new places and strengthen my relationships with them.

제안: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, try to use more varied linking words and slightly richer vocabulary.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it suits my personality. I enjoy spending time in quiet, calm, and peaceful environments where I can relax and recharge. For instance, I like going to the countryside or the beach, where there is less noise and more natural beauty.

제안: Use correct article and plural forms. For example, 'adventurous trip' should be 'adventurous trips'. Also, try to add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Although I enjoy calm and peaceful environments, I prefer an exciting holiday because I love trying new activities and exploring vibrant places. For example, I find adventurous trips more memorable and energizing than quiet ones.

× I spent most of time swimming and be like sandcastle with my sister which I really enjoyed it because it was both relaxing and fun.

✓ I spent most of the time swimming and building sandcastles with my sister, which I really enjoyed because it was both relaxing and fun.

The phrase 'be like sandcastle' is incorrect. The correct verb form after 'spent most of the time' is the gerund form 'building' to indicate the activity. Also, 'most of time' should be 'most of the time' with the definite article 'the'. Additionally, 'which I really enjoyed it' is redundant; 'which I really enjoyed' is sufficient.

× I really like holidays because they gives me a chance to spend quality time with my family, which is very important to me.

✓ I really like holidays because they give me a chance to spend quality time with my family, which is very important to me.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives' to agree in number.

× Holiday also helped me to relax and take a break from the stress caused by schoolwork and homework.

✓ Holidays also help me to relax and take a break from the stress caused by schoolwork and homework.

Since the context is general preference, present tense 'help' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'. Also, 'Holiday' should be plural 'Holidays' to match the general statement.

× My favorite My favorite public holiday is Tiny Year, also known as Sunkran, which take place from April 13 to 15.

✓ My favorite public holiday is Tiny Year, also known as Songkran, which takes place from April 13 to 15.

The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'public holiday'. Also, 'My favorite' was repeated and 'Sunkran' is corrected to 'Songkran' for accuracy.

× During this festive period, people serve it by splashing water in each other using water gun or they meet their family in outer city.

✓ During this festive period, people celebrate by splashing water on each other using water guns or they meet their family in other cities.

The phrase 'serve it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'celebrate'. Also, 'splashing water in each other' should be 'splashing water on each other'. 'Water gun' should be plural 'water guns'. 'Outer city' is incorrect; 'other cities' is appropriate.

× When I was a kid, we always went there together and those times were really fun and memorable because we enjoy swimming and relaxing by the sea.

✓ When I was a kid, we always went there together and those times were really fun and memorable because we enjoyed swimming and relaxing by the sea.

The verb tense should be consistent; since the time is past ('When I was a kid'), 'enjoy' should be 'enjoyed'.

× It is a special place that bring back many happy memories for me.

✓ It is a special place that brings back many happy memories for me.

The singular subject 'place' requires the singular verb 'brings' to agree in number.

× I enjoy spending time at home because it's relaxed, but I prefer going out with my friends and family to create more enjoyable and more experience.

✓ I enjoy spending time at home because it's relaxing, but I prefer going out with my friends and family to create more enjoyable and richer experiences.

The adjective 'relaxed' should be the present participle 'relaxing' to describe the feeling. 'More experience' is uncountable; 'richer experiences' or 'more experiences' is appropriate.

× Being outside makes me explore new places and strengthen my relationship with my friends and family.

✓ Being outside makes me explore new places and strengthens my relationships with my friends and family.

The verb 'strengthen' should be 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject 'Being outside'. Also, 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match 'friends and family'.

× I prefer a leisurely holiday because it suits my personality. I enjoy spending time in quiet, calm and peaceful environments where I can relax and recharge.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because it suits my personality. I enjoy spending time in quiet, calm, and peaceful environments where I can relax and recharge.

A comma is needed after 'calm' in a list of three adjectives to separate the items correctly (Oxford comma).

× For example, I find adventurous trip more memorable and energizing than quiet ones.

✓ For example, I find adventurous trips more memorable and energizing than quiet ones.

The noun 'trip' should be plural 'trips' to agree with the plural comparative 'more memorable and energizing than quiet ones'.