Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'It enhances creativity and boosts innovation, and you can understand the feelings and emotions behind the artwork.'

예시: I went to a museum with my friend during my last holiday to observe paintings and artwork. It enhances creativity and boosts innovation, and you can understand the feelings and emotions behind the artists' work.

제안: Reduce the use of filler words and try to make your sentences more concise and clear. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I definitely love holidays because they allow me to rest after hectic work schedules and do activities I have planned.'

예시: Yes, I definitely love holidays because they allow me to rest after hectic work schedules and do activities I have planned.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example, 'My favourite public holiday is a Thursday festival in Nepal because we celebrate it with family and relatives, which strengthens our bonds.'

예시: My favourite public holiday is a Thursday festival in Nepal because we celebrate it with family and relatives, which strengthens our bonds.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use plural forms correctly and link your ideas. For example, 'During holidays, I love to stay at home doing indoor activities like reading books, listening to music, and exercising.'

예시: During holidays, I love to stay at home doing indoor activities like reading books, listening to music, and exercising.

제안: Try to avoid filler words and use more natural expressions. For example, say 'Yes, I love spending my day at home because it reduces my stress and helps me relax better. I prefer spending most of my time at home rather than going out.'

예시: Yes, I love spending my day at home because it reduces my stress and helps me relax better. I prefer spending most of my time at home rather than going out.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words. Try to give a clear reason and use linking words. For example, 'I prefer a leisurely holiday because I can do whatever I like during that time.'

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I can do whatever I like during that time.

제안: Avoid filler words and try to make your sentences more fluent. For example, 'As an introverted person, I definitely prefer a peaceful holiday in a calm atmosphere with a clean environment, enjoying nature with few people around.'

예시: As an introverted person, I definitely prefer a peaceful holiday in a calm atmosphere with a clean environment, enjoying nature with few people around.

× Uh, it enhance, umm, creativity and boost innovation as well as you can understand the feelings and emotions with their work.

✓ Uh, it enhances, umm, creativity and boosts innovation as well as you can understand the feelings and emotions with their work.

The verbs 'enhance' and 'boost' need to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In the present tense, singular third person verbs require an 's' ending, so 'enhance' becomes 'enhances' and 'boost' becomes 'boosts'.

× I went to a museum with my friend during my last holiday to observe some painting and artwork.

✓ I went to a museum with my friend during my last holiday to observe some paintings and artwork.

The word 'painting' should be plural 'paintings' because 'some' indicates more than one. 'Artwork' can be singular or plural, but 'paintings' must be plural to match 'some'.

× There are several public holiday that I found the best but if I have to choose one Umm I will go with Thursday because Umm it is a main festival of our Nepal Umm and it we we celebrate with our families and relatives with strength on our bones and make.

✓ There are several public holidays that I find the best but if I have to choose one, Umm I will go with Thursday because Umm it is a main festival of our Nepal Umm and we celebrate with our families and relatives with strength in our bones and make.

'Public holiday' should be plural 'public holidays' to agree with 'several'. Also, 'found' should be 'find' to match present tense context. The phrase 'it we we celebrate' is incorrect; 'we celebrate' is correct. 'Strength on our bones' should be 'strength in our bones' as the correct preposition is 'in'.

× There are several public holiday that I found the best but if I have to choose one Umm I will go with Thursday because Umm it is a main festival of our Nepal Umm and it we we celebrate with our families and relatives with strength on our bones and make.

✓ There are several public holidays that I find the best but if I have to choose one, Umm I will go with Thursday because Umm it is a main festival of our Nepal Umm and we celebrate with our families and relatives with strength in our bones and make.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in the phrase 'strength on our bones'. The correct preposition is 'in' to express the feeling of strength within oneself.

× My holidays I love to bring it home by doing an indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and and do a lot of exercise.

✓ On my holidays, I love to spend time at home by doing indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and doing a lot of exercise.

The phrase 'bring it home' is incorrect in this context; 'spend time at home' is appropriate. 'An indoor activities' is incorrect because 'activities' is plural and should not have 'an'. Also, the verbs should be parallel in form: 'reading', 'listening', and 'doing'.

× My holidays I love to bring it home by doing an indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and and do a lot of exercise.

✓ On my holidays, I love to spend time at home by doing indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and doing a lot of exercise.

'An indoor activities' is incorrect because 'activities' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'an'. The article should be removed to match the plural noun.

× My holidays I love to bring it home by doing an indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and and do a lot of exercise.

✓ On my holidays, I love to spend time at home by doing indoor activities like umm reading some books, listening to music and doing a lot of exercise.

The verbs in the list should be parallel in form. 'Reading', 'listening', and 'doing' are all gerunds (-ing form), so 'do' should be changed to 'doing' to maintain parallel structure.

× I will prefer a leisurely holiday over busy holiday UMM, because UMM can do anything with likes at that period, so yeah.

✓ I will prefer a leisurely holiday over a busy holiday, UMM, because UMM you can do anything you like at that period, so yeah.

The phrase 'busy holiday' needs the article 'a' to match 'a leisurely holiday'. Also, 'can do anything with likes' is incorrect; it should be 'you can do anything you like' to express preference correctly.

× I will prefer a leisurely holiday over busy holiday UMM, because UMM can do anything with likes at that period, so yeah.

✓ I will prefer a leisurely holiday over a busy holiday, UMM, because UMM you can do anything you like at that period, so yeah.

The pronoun 'you' is missing before 'can do anything', which is necessary to clarify the subject of the sentence. Also, 'with likes' is incorrect; it should be 'you like'.