Holidays— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about the experience.

예시: I went to Tokyo, Japan last summer. Although it was quite hot, I still had a lot of fun exploring the city and trying new foods.

제안: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Provide clearer reasons and link ideas logically. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about why holidays are special.

예시: Yes, I like holidays because they are special occasions that don't happen often during the year. Since I only have about ten days off, I really look forward to spending that time relaxing and enjoying myself.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to explain your feelings about the holiday more naturally and effectively.

예시: My favorite public holiday is the New Year because it feels like a fresh start. I enjoy reflecting on the past year and looking forward to new opportunities.

제안: Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast different holiday lengths and activities more clearly.

예시: If I have more than three days off, I usually book a trip abroad. However, if I only have one or two days, I prefer to stay at home and relax.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and more natural expressions. Organize your answer with linking words to describe your routine clearly.

예시: Yes, I enjoy spending time at home. I usually sleep in, then do laundry, clean the house, and cook dinner.

제안: Clarify your preference and improve vocabulary usage. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I don't like noisy places. Crowds and loud environments make me feel exhausted.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to contrast past and present preferences more clearly.

예시: I now prefer a peaceful holiday. Although I used to enjoy exciting holidays, I now like to spend my time calmly and relax.

× I went to Tokyo, Japan on summer and it's quite hot but it's still so fun.

✓ I went to Tokyo, Japan in summer and it was quite hot but it was still so fun.

The phrase 'on summer' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' for seasons. Also, since the action happened in the past, 'it's' should be changed to 'it was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I went to Tokyo, Japan on summer and it's quite hot but it's still so fun.

✓ I went to Tokyo, Japan in summer and it's quite hot but it's still so fun.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to seasons; 'in' should be used instead.

× Yes I do because it is special occasions.

✓ Yes I do because they are special occasions.

The subject 'occasions' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number and tense.

× Yes I do because it is special occasions.

✓ Yes I do because they are special occasions.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'occasions' which is plural; 'they' should be used instead.

× That's not happened much in the year.

✓ That hasn't happened much this year.

The phrase 'That's not happened' is incorrect; the present perfect negative 'hasn't happened' is appropriate here. Also, 'in the year' should be 'this year' for natural expression.

× I just have a 10 holiday off so I look forward to spend my time on holidays.

✓ I just have 10 holidays off so I look forward to spending my time on holidays.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to match the number 10. Also, 'look forward to' is followed by a gerund, so 'spend' should be 'spending'.

× I just have a 10 holiday off so I look forward to spend my time on holidays.

✓ I just have 10 holidays off so I look forward to spending my time on holidays.

'Look forward to' is a phrasal verb that requires the verb following it to be in the '-ing' form.

× My favorite public holiday is the end, the end of the year and the new year because I feel like the new thing is start and the old thing is get over.

✓ My favorite public holiday is the end of the year and the New Year because I feel like new things start and old things end.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms. 'The new thing is start' should be 'new things start' and 'the old thing is get over' should be 'old things end' for clarity and correctness.

× If I can live more than three day I always book the trip, go abroad.

✓ If I can live more than three days, I always book a trip and go abroad.

'More than three day' should be 'more than three days' (plural). Also, 'book the trip' is better as 'book a trip' unless referring to a specific trip.

× If I can live more than three day I always book the trip, go abroad.

✓ If I can live more than three days, I always book a trip and go abroad.

'Day' should be plural 'days' to match 'more than three'.

× But if just like in one or couple day, I love to stay at home and just relax myself.

✓ But if it's just one or a couple of days, I love to stay at home and just relax.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect phrasing. Adding 'it's' and correcting 'couple day' to 'a couple of days' improves clarity. Also, 'relax myself' is unnatural; 'relax' suffices.

× But if just like in one or couple day, I love to stay at home and just relax myself.

✓ But if it's just one or a couple of days, I love to stay at home and just relax.

'Relax myself' is incorrect; 'relax' is a reflexive verb here and does not require 'myself'.

× I love to spend the time at my home, just rely on the bed, get up late and after that I'm doing laundry things, cleaning the house and cooking something for dinner.

✓ I love to spend time at home, just lie on the bed, get up late, and after that I do laundry, clean the house, and cook something for dinner.

'Spend the time' should be 'spend time'. 'Rely on the bed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'lie on the bed'. Also, 'I'm doing laundry things' should be 'I do laundry' for natural expression.

× I prefer a literally because I'm not like the noisy place.

✓ I prefer a quiet place because I don't like noisy places.

'Literally' is an adverb and misused here; the intended meaning is 'quiet'. Also, 'I'm not like the noisy place' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like noisy places'.

× I prefer a literally because I'm not like the noisy place.

✓ I prefer a quiet place because I don't like noisy places.

'I'm not like the noisy place' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'I don't like noisy places' is correct.

× I can't even stand on the noisy environment and a lot of people, it's not fun.

✓ I can't even stand noisy environments and crowds; it's not fun.

'Stand on the noisy environment' is incorrect; 'stand noisy environments' or 'stand being in noisy environments' is correct. Also, 'a lot of people' is better expressed as 'crowds'.

× It's make me feel exhausted.

✓ It makes me feel exhausted.

'It's make' is incorrect; the correct form is 'It makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× I do prefer a peaceful holiday after.

✓ I do prefer a peaceful holiday now.

'After' is incorrectly used here; 'now' or 'these days' better conveys the intended meaning.

× I love to just spend myself calm and relax.

✓ I love to just spend time calmly and relax.

'Spend myself calm' is incorrect; 'spend time calmly' is the correct expression. Also, 'calm' should be the adverb 'calmly'.