Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, use 'flowers' instead of 'flower' when plural, and say 'make my garden more beautiful' instead of 'more beautifully'. Also, keep your answer clear and concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually keep plants at home, especially in my backyard. I enjoy planting flowers because they make my garden more beautiful and create a lively atmosphere. For example, on weekends, I like to plant and care for flowers, which helps me feel relaxed when I visit my garden.

제안: Focus on correct verb tenses and plural forms, and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I planted several types of flowers' and 'sunflowers are beautiful because of their shape and color'. Also, try to be more specific and clear in your explanations.

예시: When I was young, I planted several types of flowers, but my favorite was the sunflower. I think sunflowers are beautiful because of their unique shape and bright colors. For example, in spring, they bloom with colorful blossoms that help me relax and refresh my mood.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Use correct phrases like 'grow plants better' and 'types of plants'. Also, complete your sentences and avoid unclear endings. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I know some tips on how to grow plants better. Growing plants can be challenging because we need to provide the right amount of water, sunlight, and nutrients. For example, I have planted many types of plants to learn which ones need more sunlight and which do not. Therefore, being a gardener requires careful attention.

제안: Work on sentence structure and vocabulary. Use correct words like 'plants' instead of 'plans' and avoid incomplete or unclear sentences. Also, organize your ideas clearly and avoid unnecessary phrases.

예시: I don't know much about Chinese culture because I am Cambodian. However, I think Chinese people send plants as gifts on special occasions like birthdays or weddings. Giving flowers is considered a meaningful and thoughtful gift in their culture.

× I really enjoy planting flower in my backyard because it's make my garden more beautiful and create a lively atmosphere.

✓ I really enjoy planting flowers in my backyard because they make my garden more beautiful and create a lively atmosphere.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple plants. Also, 'it's make' is incorrect; it should be 'they make' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'.

× For example, on the weekend I usually enjoy planting and carrying flower, so that can make my garden more beautifully and help me to feel relaxed after visiting it.

✓ For example, on the weekend I usually enjoy planting and caring for flowers, so that can make my garden more beautiful and help me feel relaxed after visiting it.

The verb 'carrying' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'caring' which fits the context of tending plants. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'More beautifully' should be 'more beautiful' because it describes the garden (an adjective), not the action (adverb).

× When I was young I have planted several type of flower but one I like the most was sunflower.

✓ When I was young I planted several types of flowers but the one I liked the most was sunflower.

The present perfect 'have planted' is incorrect with the past time marker 'when I was young'; simple past 'planted' is correct. 'Type' should be plural 'types' and 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past context.

× For my opinion, sunflower was a beautiful flowers that I have ever planted because of its shape and colorful.

✓ In my opinion, sunflower was a beautiful flower that I have ever planted because of its shape and color.

'For my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'Flowers' should be singular 'flower' because 'sunflower' is singular. 'Colorful' is an adjective; here, the noun 'color' is appropriate.

× For example, during spring it's always turned into colorful blossom which bring me relax and refresh my mood at that time so it can make me feel more.

✓ For example, during spring it always turns into colorful blossoms which bring me relaxation and refresh my mood, so it makes me feel better.

'It's always turned' should be present simple 'it always turns' for habitual action. 'Blossom' should be plural 'blossoms'. 'Bring me relax' is incorrect; it should be 'bring me relaxation'. 'Make me feel more' is vague; 'make me feel better' is clearer.

× Yes, I know some tips of how to grow plant better for my opinion.

✓ Yes, I know some tips on how to grow plants better in my opinion.

'Tips of' should be 'tips on'. 'Grow plant' should be 'grow plants' (plural). 'For my opinion' should be 'in my opinion'. All are standard prepositional uses.

× Growing plant can be a challenging problem for us because we need to think critically about the providing the right amount of water, sunlight and addition that can make them grow more better.

✓ Growing plants can be a challenging problem for us because we need to think critically about providing the right amount of water, sunlight, and nutrients that can help them grow better.

'Growing plant' should be plural 'growing plants'. 'The providing' is incorrect; it should be 'providing'. 'Addition' is incorrect; 'nutrients' or 'fertilizer' is appropriate. 'More better' is redundant; 'better' alone is correct.

× For example, I have planned so many type of friends so that I can understand which plan and need sunlight and which are not.

✓ For example, I have planted many types of plants so that I can understand which plants need sunlight and which do not.

'Have planned' is incorrect; 'have planted' fits the context of planting. 'Type of friends' is incorrect; should be 'types of plants'. 'Plan' should be 'plants'. 'Which are not' should be 'which do not'.

× So being a planter we could.

✓ So, being a planter, we could learn a lot.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'learn a lot' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× But for my opinion, I think that Chinese people send plans, ask if on special occasion like birthday party, wedding or when they want to celebrate party with someone so they can use give us a flower.

✓ But in my opinion, I think that Chinese people send plants as gifts on special occasions like birthday parties, weddings, or when they want to celebrate with someone, so they can give flowers.

'For my opinion' should be 'in my opinion'. 'Send plans' should be 'send plants'. 'Ask if on special occasion' is incorrect; rephrased to 'on special occasions'. 'Celebrate party' is redundant; 'celebrate' suffices. 'Use give us a flower' is incorrect; 'give flowers' is correct.

× To them it is like a meaningful, A thoughtful gift.

✓ To them, it is like a meaningful, thoughtful gift.

Capital 'A' in the middle of the sentence is incorrect; it should be lowercase. Also, the comma placement is corrected for clarity.

× They have a risk.

✓ They take a risk.

'They have a risk' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'They take a risk' to indicate facing potential danger or loss.