Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子结构较复杂且有些冗长，建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并且注意语法准确性。

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home because I live in a dormitory with my classmates, so I don't have enough space or time to take care of them.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，句子不够清晰，建议使用简单明了的句子结构，并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

예시: When I was a child, my parents and I planted some Chinese roses in front of our house. They bloomed beautifully in spring and summer.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达自己的学习经历和认识。

예시: Yes, I studied plant protection at university, so I know some basics about growing plants. However, I still have a lot to learn to become an expert.

제안: 回答中存在用词错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用正确的词汇，避免错误表达，并且提供更具体的例子。

예시: Yes, Chinese people often give flowers as gifts on special occasions. For example, couples exchange flowers on Valentine's Day to show their love.

× When I was a child, my parents and I planned some Chinese roses in front of my yard.

✓ When I was a child, my parents and I planted some Chinese rose plants in front of my yard.

这里'some Chinese roses'用法不当，'rose'作为植物名词时，复数形式应为'rose plants'或直接用单数形式表示种植的植物。'planned'应为'planted'，表示种植动作。

× They are later over than two roses and as same as beautiful as these flowers more when they throw in spring and summer.

✓ Later, there were more than two roses and they were as beautiful as these flowers when they bloomed in spring and summer.

句子时态混乱，'are'应改为过去时'were'，'throw'应为'bloomed'，表示花开。'as same as'是错误表达，应为'as beautiful as'。

× Of course I measure the plant protection in at university so I know something about how to grow a plant.

✓ Of course, I studied plant protection at university, so I know something about how to grow a plant.

'measure'用错，应为'studied'表示学习。'in at university'中'in'多余，应去掉。

× Nor but just a little there have a long way to go before I become a depth professor in this field.

✓ But I only know a little; there is a long way to go before I become a professor in this field.

'Nor but'用法错误，应该用'But'。'depth professor'表达不正确，应为'professor'。句子结构混乱，需拆分。

× Yes, on some special occasions, Chinese tend to send flowers as a gift.

✓ Yes, on some special occasions, Chinese people tend to send flowers as gifts.

'Chinese'作为复数时应加'people'，'a gift'应改为复数形式'gifts'，与'flowers'对应。

× For example, in volunteers day lovers, Chinese couples will give each other a bunch of flowers to express their love.

✓ For example, on Valentine's Day, Chinese couples will give each other a bunch of flowers to express their love.

'volunteers day lovers'错误，应为'Valentine's Day'。介词'in'应改为'on'用于表示节日。

× Moreover, we use flowers as oppression.

✓ Moreover, we use flowers as expressions of affection.

'oppression'意思是压迫，语义错误，应为'expressions of affection'表示用花表达感情。