Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and effective by avoiding redundancy and adding a bit more detail. For example, explain why you like flowers or mention a specific type you enjoy.

예시: Yes, I keep several plants at home, mainly flowers like roses and lilies, because they brighten up the room and create a pleasant atmosphere.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and using linking words to make it coherent. Also, be more specific about the types of plants and your feelings about gardening.

예시: When I was young, my father and I planted various trees in our garden, such as palm trees, raspberry bushes, and grapevines. We really enjoyed spending time together outdoors.

제안: Focus on clarity and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain the process logically and avoid confusing phrases. Try to simplify your explanation.

예시: Yes, I recently taught my daughter how to grow plants. First, you sow the seed into the soil, then water it regularly. With good soil and proper care, the seed grows into a plant with stems, roots, and leaves.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding linking words and more specific examples related to Chinese culture to enrich the content.

예시: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts, especially lucky bamboo and orchids, which symbolize good fortune. Similarly, in Bahrain, people also give flowers and plants like sunflowers as presents.

× We planted balmy tree as well as Raspberry tree, grapes and many flowers.

✓ We planted balmy trees as well as raspberry trees, grapes, and many flowers.

The nouns 'balmy tree' and 'Raspberry tree' should be pluralized to 'balmy trees' and 'raspberry trees' because multiple trees were planted. Also, 'Raspberry' should not be capitalized as it is a common noun here. This correction ensures proper agreement in number and correct noun capitalization.

× We enjoy being in the garden.

✓ We enjoyed being in the garden.

The sentence refers to a past event ('when I was young'), so the verb 'enjoy' should be in the past tense 'enjoyed' to maintain tense consistency.

× I remember that me and my father planted different trees in the garden outside our house.

✓ I remember that my father and I planted different trees in the garden outside our house.

The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of the object pronoun 'me' when it is the subject of the verb. Also, it is polite to mention oneself last ('my father and I').

× Recently I've been teaching my daughter the stabs of a planting.

✓ Recently I've been teaching my daughter the steps of planting.

The word 'stabs' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'steps' to indicate stages or procedures. Also, 'a planting' is unnecessary; 'planting' alone suffices.

× She knows now that the first step in planting, that the seed is sowed into the soil and then with the help of water and this the good soil and good conditions which grow into stem roads and leaves, she mastered.

✓ She now knows that the first step in planting is that the seed is sown into the soil, and then with the help of water and good soil conditions, it grows into stems, roots, and leaves; she has mastered this.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'sowed' should be 'sown' as the past participle; 'stem roads' is incorrect and should be 'stems and roots'; 'this the good soil' is unclear and corrected to 'good soil conditions'; sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.