Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'basils' wa 'basil' ni shite, 'grow foods' wa 'grow food' ni shiyou. Mata, sentence ga nagai node, 2-3 bunshou ni wakete, rikai shi yasuku shiyou. Konkyo wo tsukete, motto tokutei na jouhou wo tsukeru to yoi desu.

예시: Recently, I have been growing tomatoes and basil at home since this summer. It is quite an enjoyable activity because I like taking care of plants. Also, having fresh tomatoes at home is very convenient.

제안: Grammar no shippai ga arimasu. 'have never grew' wa 'had never grown' ni, 'cultivating plans' wa 'cultivating plants' ni shiyou. Mata, 'since' no tsukaikata mo chotto fumei desu. Koko dewa 'when I was in high school' to iu hou ga yoku, bunshou wo motto seikaku ni shiyou.

예시: When I was a child, I had never grown any vegetables at home because I was not interested. However, I became interested in cultivating plants when I was in high school and started planting then.

제안: 'those knowledge' wa 'that knowledge' ni shiyou. 'I have some knowledge about it' wa motto shizen ni 'I have some knowledge about growing plants' to shiyou. Sentence no tsuzuki mo motto rikai shi yasuku, 'because' to 'but' no tsukaikata ni chuumoku shite bunshou wo seikaku ni shiyou.

예시: Yes, I have some knowledge about growing plants because I am currently growing them. However, I learned most of it after I started planting, so my knowledge is still limited.

제안: 'sending plans' wa 'sending plants' ni shiyou. 'I guess' ga futatabi tsukawarete iru node, betsu no hyougen de 'probably' nado wo tsukatte, kotoba no kurikaeshi wo sakete kudasai. Motto tokutei na jouhou ya reigai wo tsukeru to yoi desu.

예시: I'm not quite sure about Chinese customs, but I think they probably send plants as gifts. Sending plants is a common practice worldwide, and it is likely that Chinese people do the same.

× Well recently I have been growing tomatoes and basils at home and more precisely from this summer and it's a quite enjoyable activity to grow foods and it also very nice to have plants at home.

✓ Well, recently I have been growing tomatoes and basil at home, more precisely since this summer, and it's quite an enjoyable activity to grow food. It is also very nice to have plants at home.

The word 'basils' should be singular 'basil' as it is an uncountable noun in this context (Grammar problem type ID: 1). 'Foods' should be 'food' because 'food' is an uncountable noun (Grammar problem type ID: 1). Also, the sentence structure was improved for clarity and correctness.

× When I was a child, I have never grew any vegetables at home because I'm not interested in.

✓ When I was a child, I never grew any vegetables at home because I was not interested in them.

The verb 'have never grew' is incorrect; it should be 'never grew' to match the past tense context (Grammar problem type ID: 5). Also, 'I'm not interested in' should be 'I was not interested in them' to maintain past tense and complete the phrase with the object 'them'.

× I became interested in cultivating plans since high school and actually started planting since.

✓ I became interested in cultivating plants in high school and actually started planting then.

The preposition 'since' is incorrectly used here; 'in high school' is correct for a time period, and 'then' is better than 'since' to indicate the time when planting started (Grammar problem type ID: 11). Also, 'plans' should be 'plants' (spelling error).

× Yes, because I I'm growing plants now so I have some knowledge about it.

✓ Yes, because I'm growing plants now, so I have some knowledge about them.

The phrase 'I I'm' is a typo and should be 'I'm'. Also, 'knowledge about it' should be 'knowledge about them' because 'plants' is plural (Grammar problem type ID: 12).

× But actually I learned those knowledge after I started planting so my knowledge is so limited.

✓ But actually, I learned that knowledge after I started planting, so my knowledge is quite limited.

The word 'those' is incorrect with 'knowledge' which is uncountable; 'that knowledge' is correct (Grammar problem type ID: 14). Also, 'so limited' is better expressed as 'quite limited' for naturalness.

× I'm not quite sure about Chinese customs, but I guess they do because sending plans as gifts is quite common and you can see this habit all over the world, so I guess Chinese people also do.

✓ I'm not quite sure about Chinese customs, but I guess they do because sending plants as gifts is quite common and you can see this habit all over the world, so I guess Chinese people also do.

The word 'plans' is a typo and should be 'plants' (Grammar problem type ID: 12).