Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“count at home”应为“keep plants at home”，且表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和模糊表达。

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home because I'm allergic to them. However, I really like plants and enjoy seeing them in other places.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“keep lungs”应为“keep plants”，且表达不够连贯。建议直接回答问题并用连接词丰富内容。

예시: I didn't grow any plants when I was young because I was allergic to them, and my doctor advised me not to. Therefore, I avoided keeping plants at home.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I don't know much about growing plants because of my allergy. However, my parents know a lot about it and often take care of their garden.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，如“Sent in prunes”应为“Sending plants”，且表达不连贯。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，清晰表达观点。

예시: I don't think Chinese people usually send plants as gifts because it might be considered unusual. Instead, they often give fresh fruits or other traditional presents.

× If I keep plants, uh, I will have a special feed kind of disease, but I really love plants.

✓ If I keep plants, uh, I will have a special kind of allergic disease, but I really love plants.

这里'special feed kind of disease'中的'feed'是错误的，应该是'allergic'，表示过敏的疾病。'kind of'后面接单数名词。

× So I did not keep lungs when I was young.

✓ So I did not keep plants when I was young.

这里'lungs'是错误的，应该是'plants'，因为上下文讲的是植物。

× Maybe I have no idea about growing a plant because I'm really allergic to it and maybe I should less interest in growing a plant.

✓ Maybe I have no idea about growing plants because I'm really allergic to them and maybe I have less interest in growing plants.

'it'指代复数'plants'不正确，应该用'them'。'should less interest'结构错误，应该用'have less interest'。

× Wow my parents have we know about growing a plant.

✓ Wow, my parents know about growing plants.

句子结构混乱，'have we know'错误，应简化为'my parents know'。

× Sent in prunes as gifts to people seems a little bit weird in the culture of Chinese.

✓ Sending plants as gifts to people seems a little bit weird in Chinese culture.

'Sent in prunes'错误，应为'Sending plants'。'Chinese culture'前不加'the'。

× Chinese people usually send other things like fresh fruits to people as the gifts instead of purely safety.

✓ Chinese people usually send other things like fresh fruits to people as gifts instead of plants.

'the gifts'应为' gifts'，'purely safety'错误，应为'plants'。

× Gift clowns as a gift.

✓ Giving plants as a gift.

'Gift clowns'错误，应为'Giving plants'。