Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "to to breathing to breed it." Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home because they require a lot of time and care, and I am usually too busy to take care of them.

제안: Your answer has some unclear words like "small sunflower stair" and incomplete sentences. Try to use correct vocabulary and complete your thoughts. Also, add a bit more detail to make your answer richer.

예시: When I was young, I grew a small sunflower plant because I like sunflowers. I think they symbolize happiness and positivity.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains many fillers like "uh" and "umm." Try to prepare your answer to be more fluent and complete. Also, avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences.

예시: Yes, I know some basics about growing plants. For example, you should change the water at least three times a week to keep the plant healthy.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "Group A plan." Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, provide a bit more explanation to support your answer.

예시: Actually, Chinese people usually don't give plants as gifts because not everyone has enough time to take care of them. Therefore, other thoughtful gifts are more common.

× I don't keep plan at home because it takes me too many time to take care of it

✓ I don't keep plants at home because it takes me too much time to take care of them

The word 'plan' should be plural 'plants' to match the context. Also, 'too many time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable, so 'too much time' is correct. Additionally, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'plants'.

× I don't have many time to to breathing to breed it

✓ I don't have much time to breathe and grow them

The phrase 'to to breathing to breed it' is incorrect. 'Breathing' should be 'breathe' (infinitive form), and 'breed' is not appropriate here; 'grow' is better for plants. Also, 'many time' should be 'much time' because 'time' is uncountable. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural plants.

× I brought a small sunflower stair because I like sunflower

✓ I bought a small sunflower seed because I like sunflowers

'Brought' is incorrect; 'bought' is the correct past tense of 'buy'. 'Stair' is incorrect; likely meant 'seed'. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' when talking generally.

× I think the meaning of it is very. Meaningful.

✓ I think its meaning is very meaningful

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Very' should modify 'meaningful' directly, and 'meaning of it' is better as 'its meaning'.

× Yes, I know a few, uh, a little thing about it

✓ Yes, I know a few things about it

'A little thing' is incorrect; 'a few things' is appropriate for countable items like 'things'.

× such as you need to change the water at least three times a week and you need to, you need to.

✓ such as you need to change the water at least three times a week

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Removing the repeated phrase improves clarity.

× Actually Chinese people don't send a plant as a gift because uh, not everyone have enough time to Group A plan or take care of it

✓ Actually, Chinese people don't send plants as gifts because not everyone has enough time to grow a plant or take care of it

'A plant' should be plural 'plants' to match general statement. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'everyone'. 'Group A plan' is incorrect; likely meant 'grow a plant'.

× So other thoughtful gift is more suitable

✓ So other thoughtful gifts are more suitable

'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'other'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'gifts'.