Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且内容相关，但可以增加更多细节描述植物种类或养护方法，使答案更具体丰富。

예시: Yes, I keep a few small green plants at home, such as succulents and spider plants. They are easy to care for and add a refreshing touch to my room. When I study, looking at them helps me feel calm and focused.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但语言表达稍显简单，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免语法错误。

예시: When I was young, I grew beans in primary school as part of a science project. We placed the beans on cotton, watered them daily, and observed their growth. I was excited to check every morning to see how much they had grown.

제안: 回答较简单且有口语填充词，建议减少犹豫词汇，增加具体细节和连贯表达。

예시: I know the basics of growing plants, such as providing soil, water, sunlight, and air. Although I'm not an expert, I often watch my grandpa gardening, which has taught me a lot about plant care.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但可以用更自然的表达方式，避免直译和生硬的句子。

예시: In China, it's uncommon to give plants as gifts, except for special occasions like moving into a new home or starting a business. On these occasions, people often give lucky bamboo, which symbolizes good luck and steady growth.

× we put beans in cotton, water them every day and waited for them to support

✓ we put beans in cotton, watered them every day and waited for them to sprout

这里描述的是过去发生的动作，动词时态应保持一致。'water' 应改为过去式 'watered'。另外，'support' 用词不当，应该用 'sprout' 表示发芽。

× I was excited checking them every morning to see if they grew taller

✓ I was excited to check them every morning to see if they grew taller

动词 'checking' 在这里用作目的状语时，应使用不定式 'to check'，而不是动名词形式。

× sometimes I just watch him doing that

✓ sometimes I just watch him do that

动词 'watch' 后面接动词时，通常用动词原形而非进行时。应改为 'watch him do'。