Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子，避免冗余，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I keep some small green plants in my bedroom because they improve my mood and help me breathe fresh air. Taking care of them also helps me relax.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构较为简单，建议注意时态一致性，并丰富细节描述。

예시: When I was young, I lived in the countryside where we had a big yard. I grew peach trees with my grandmother, and in summer we enjoyed eating the sweet and delicious peaches.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, definitely. To grow plants well, we need to prepare some tools, use good quality soil, provide enough sunlight, and water them regularly.

제안: 回答中有较多口头语和不连贯表达，建议减少填充词，使用完整句子，并且表达更具体。

예시: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts, especially when someone moves into a new house. Plants are believed to improve air quality and bring good luck during festivals.

× Yes, I keep some small plants, green plants at my bedroom and it could make me have a good mood and it I could breathe fresh air in my bedroom, could relax myself, but I need to take care of them.

✓ Yes, I keep some small green plants in my bedroom and they can make me feel good. I can breathe fresh air in my bedroom and relax myself, but I need to take care of them.

句中“plants”是复数，后面却用了单数代词“it”，应改为复数代词“they”。另外，“at my bedroom”应改为“in my bedroom”，介词使用错误。

× When I was young, I lived in the countryside in my hometown and we have a big yard, so I growed a Peach trees with my grandmother and in summer we could eat.

✓ When I was young, I lived in the countryside in my hometown and we had a big yard, so I grew a peach tree with my grandmother and in summer we could eat the peaches.

“have”应使用过去式“had”以符合过去时间；“growed”是错误的过去式，正确为“grew”；“a Peach trees”中“a”与复数“trees”不匹配，应改为单数“a peach tree”；“Peach”应小写。

× Yes, definitely. We need to prepare some tools to grow the plants and the plants grow well, need the good quality soil and enough sunlight and we need to regular watering them.

✓ Yes, definitely. We need to prepare some tools to grow the plants. For the plants to grow well, they need good quality soil and enough sunlight, and we need to water them regularly.

“need the good quality soil”中“the”不合适，应去掉；“regular watering them”结构错误，应改为“water them regularly”。

× Yes, maybe especially when people lived in a new house, uh, uh, his friends often, uh, send the plants for gifts for these people because it could, uh, make the air quality well, and maybe sometimes in the festival we, uh, send.

✓ Yes, maybe especially when people live in a new house, their friends often send plants as gifts because they can improve the air quality. And sometimes during festivals, we also send plants.

“send the plants for gifts for these people”中介词使用错误，应改为“send plants as gifts”；“make the air quality well”表达不自然，应改为“improve the air quality”；“in the festival”应改为“during festivals”。