Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ, ਜਿਸ ਨਾਲ ਜਵਾਬ ਕੁਦਰਤੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਲੱਗਦਾ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਰੱਖੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਹੀ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।

예시: Yes, I keep plants at home because they make the environment fresh and lively. When guests visit, they feel relaxed and close to nature because of the plants.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਸਮੇਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਜਾਣਕਾਰੀ ਦੇ ਨਾਲ ਬਣਾਓ।

예시: Two years ago, I grew lotus plants at home. I found that growing lotus requires a lot of hard work because they are a special variety.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਚੋਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਬਣਾਓ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋਂ।

예시: Yes, I know some basic information about growing plants. It is important to water them properly because each plant needs the right amount of water to grow well.

제안: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਲੰਬਾਈ ਬਹੁਤ ਜ਼ਿਆਦਾ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਗਲਤ ਵਿਆਕਰਨ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ, ਸੰਖੇਪ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਾਓ।

예시: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts because it symbolizes promoting nature and is considered a precious present.

× Yes, I grew the plants at home because is it defined to granary at the home.

✓ Yes, I grow plants at home because it is defined as a granary at home.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is it defined' and 'grew' which is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'grow' and correct 'it is defined' are needed.

× If any guests are come to the home, they can to feel very energetic and natural close to the nature because of the plant.

✓ If any guests come to the home, they can feel very energetic and close to nature because of the plants.

The phrase 'are come' is incorrect; 'come' is the correct verb form here. 'Can to feel' should be 'can feel'. 'Close to the nature' should be 'close to nature'. Also, 'plant' should be plural 'plants' to match context.

× Last two year ago. I have to grow the Lotus at the home and I find that that variety of Lotus.

✓ Two years ago, I grew Lotus at home and I found that variety of Lotus.

'Last two year ago' is incorrect; 'Two years ago' is correct. 'Have to grow' is incorrect past tense; 'grew' is correct. 'Find' should be past tense 'found'.

× Lot of hard work because they are real variety.

✓ It was a lot of hard work because they are a real variety.

'Lot of' should be 'a lot of'. The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'It was' clarifies meaning.

× Uh yes I get the basic information about how to groom the plant.

✓ Uh yes, I have basic information about how to grow the plant.

'Get' is not the best verb here; 'have' is better. Also, 'groom' is incorrect; 'grow' is the correct verb for plants.

× Was it unnecessary if I I have to water the any plant in the right way because every plant have to wash the lot of.

✓ It is necessary to water any plant in the right way because every plant needs a lot of water.

The sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Was it unnecessary' is incorrect; 'It is necessary' fits better. 'I have to water the any plant' is incorrect; 'water any plant' is correct. 'Every plant have' should be 'every plant needs'. 'Wash the lot of' is incorrect; 'needs a lot of water' is correct.

× Uh, just Chinese people have sent the plants as a gift because it's the very good way to promote the nature around the world and in the country is the very precious gift for the those person who sent to the other and who person.

✓ Yes, Chinese people send plants as gifts because it's a very good way to promote nature around the world, and in the country, it is a very precious gift for those people who send them to others.

'Just Chinese people have sent' is incorrect; 'Chinese people send' is better for habitual action. 'It's the very good way' should be 'it's a very good way'. 'Promote the nature' should be 'promote nature'. 'For the those person who sent to the other and who person' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'for those people who send them to others'.