Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I do have a habit of"; instead, say "I keep plants at home." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I keep several plants at home, including my favourites like roses and jasmines, which add colour and fragrance to my living space.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "Bambooz" should be "bamboo" and "added a touch of greener" should be "added a touch of green". Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: When I was young, I grew bamboo plants at home because they are easy to care for; they need little water and grow well in iron-rich soil. I enjoyed them as they added a refreshing touch of green to my room.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but watch for small grammar mistakes like "plants needs" which should be "plants need." Also, you can improve coherence by using linking words such as "for example" or "in addition."

예시: Although I'm not an expert, I have learned that plants need regular watering and should be placed where they get enough sunlight to grow well.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and grammatically correct. For example, "These particularly applies" should be "This particularly applies." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, it is a tradition in China to give plants as gifts, especially during special occasions like weddings and Chinese New Year celebrations.

× When I was a kid I used to grow bamboos in my house.

✓ When I was a kid I used to grow bamboo in my house.

The word 'bamboo' is an uncountable noun when referring to the plant in general, so it should not be pluralised as 'bamboos'. Use 'bamboo' to refer to the plant species collectively.

× Bambooz is a type of plant that is easy to take care since it requires minimal watering and thrives well in iron rich soil.

✓ Bamboo is a type of plant that is easy to take care of since it requires minimal watering and thrives well in iron-rich soil.

The word 'Bambooz' seems to be a typo and should be 'Bamboo'. Also, the phrase 'easy to take care' is incomplete; it should be 'easy to take care of'. Additionally, 'iron rich' should be hyphenated as 'iron-rich' because it is a compound adjective.

× I enjoyed growing them because they added a touch of greener.

✓ I enjoyed growing them because they added a touch of green.

The word 'greener' is a comparative adjective and is incorrect here. The correct noun form 'green' should be used to describe the colour or freshness added by the plants.

× I know that plants needs to be watered regularly and placed in a spot with sufficient sunlight to grow well.

✓ I know that plants need to be watered regularly and placed in a spot with sufficient sunlight to grow well.

The subject 'plants' is plural, so the verb should be 'need' instead of 'needs' to agree in number.

× These particularly applies to special moments such as weddings, Chinese New Year celebrations and many other occasions.

✓ These particularly apply to special moments such as weddings, Chinese New Year celebrations and many other occasions.

The subject 'These' is plural, so the verb should be 'apply' instead of 'applies' to maintain subject-verb agreement.