Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答整体自然且内容丰富，但有些表达不够准确，例如“don't take much efforts”应为“don't take much effort”。建议注意单复数和不可数名词的用法，同时可以适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I keep a couple of small green plants like succulents and ferns at home. They don't require much effort or care, which is very convenient for me. Moreover, they brighten up my living space. Sometimes, when I'm studying, just looking at them helps me relax and feel refreshed.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以增加一些连接词如“and”或“so”来增强连贯性。此外，注意时态的一致性，例如“water”应为“watered”。

예시: I clearly remember growing beans at my primary school as part of a science project. We put beans into the soil and watered them every day. I was so excited to check and observe them every morning to see if they had grown taller.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子稍显冗长且缺少适当的连接词。建议使用更多连接词如“because”或“so”来使句子更连贯，同时注意表达的简洁性。

예시: I know the basics, such as plants need sufficient sunlight, fresh water, and good air circulation because these elements are essential for photosynthesis. Although I don't know much, my grandfather is very passionate about gardening, so I sometimes watch him to learn more.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“symbol sympathize”不正确，应为“symbolize”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并且句子结构可以更简洁流畅。

예시: Yes, Chinese people often send plants like lucky bamboo or orchids as gifts because these plants are believed to symbolize good fortune and steady progress. For example, people usually give them when someone moves into a new house or starts a business.

× They don't take much efforts and care, which is really convenient for me, and they really brighten up my living space.

✓ They don't take much effort and care, which is really convenient for me, and they really brighten up my living space.

“efforts”应为不可数名词“effort”，表示“努力”，这里用单数形式更合适。

× I clearly remember growing beans at my primary school as part of a science project.

✓ I clearly remember growing beans in my primary school as part of a science project.

表示“在某个学校”，应使用介词“in”而非“at”。

× We put beans into the soil, water them every day, and waited for them to sprout.

✓ We put beans into the soil, watered them every day, and waited for them to sprout.

句子描述过去的动作，动词“water”应使用过去式“watered”以保持时态一致。

× I don't know that much, but my grandfather is very passionate about gardening, so sometimes I just watch him doing that.

✓ I don't know that much, but my grandfather is very passionate about gardening, so sometimes I just watch him do that.

动词“watch”后应接动词原形“do”，而非现在分词“doing”。

× It is very common for Chinese people to send plants like lucky bamboo or orchids as gifts because these kinds are believed to symbol sympathize the fortune and steady progress.

✓ It is very common for Chinese people to send plants like lucky bamboo or orchids as gifts because these kinds are believed to symbolize fortune and steady progress.

“symbol”应为动词“symbolize”，表示“象征”，而“sympathize”意为“同情”，用词错误。

× For instance, people often send them as gifts when someone moves into new house or opens a business.

✓ For instance, people often send them as gifts when someone moves into a new house or opens a business.

“new house”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示“一所新房子”，缺少冠词导致语法错误。