Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I don't know how to take care of my plants" after saying you are not careful. Try to use a more natural expression and keep it within 3-4 sentences.

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home because I find it hard to take care of them properly. I'm not very patient, so I prefer not to have plants that need constant attention.

제안: There are some grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. For example, "easy to creative" should be "easy to grow" and "require regular watery" should be "require regular watering." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: When I was young, I grew tomato plants in my backyard. They are easy to grow because they need regular watering and plenty of sunlight, which made them perfect for a beginner like me.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear vocabulary, such as "have to have need" and "enough Flyers." Try to use simple, correct sentences and relevant vocabulary. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I know that plants need enough sunlight and water to grow well. Also, they require good soil and proper care to stay healthy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific examples with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck. For example, when someone moves into a new house, it is common to give plants or money as presents.

× Tomatoes are relatively easy to creative and require regular watery and sunlight, which made them perfect for our beginner like me.

✓ Tomatoes are relatively easy to grow and require regular water and sunlight, which made them perfect for a beginner like me.

The verb 'creative' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'grow' to describe plant cultivation. Also, 'watery' is an adjective meaning containing water, but the noun 'water' is needed here. 'Our beginner like me' is incorrect; it should be 'a beginner like me' to indicate the speaker's status.

× Tomatoes are relatively easy to creative and require regular watery and sunlight, which made them perfect for our beginner like me.

✓ Tomatoes are relatively easy to grow and require regular water and sunlight, which made them perfect for a beginner like me.

The phrase 'regular watery and sunlight' is incorrect; 'water' is an uncountable noun and should not be modified by 'watery'. The correct phrase is 'regular water and sunlight' to indicate the necessary elements for plant growth.

× Yes, of course, like plants have to have need the sunshine and the water and enough Flyers so that they can grow quickly and healthy.

✓ Yes, of course, plants need sunshine, water, and enough fertilizer so that they can grow quickly and healthily.

The phrase 'have to have need' is redundant and incorrect; 'plants need' is sufficient. 'The sunshine and the water' should be 'sunshine and water' without 'the' as these are general concepts. 'Flyers' is incorrect; the correct word is 'fertilizer'. 'Healthy' is an adjective, but an adverb 'healthily' is needed to modify 'grow'.

× Yes we do because it's popular things for give a gift as our plans for instance when some people. Move into new house, we will buy gifts like money.

✓ Yes, we do because it's popular to give plants as gifts. For instance, when some people move into a new house, we buy gifts like money.

The phrase 'popular things for give a gift as our plans' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'popular to give plants as gifts'. 'Move' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. 'New house' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.