Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve pronunciation and grammar, especially the word 'plants' and verb tenses. Use clearer sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Add linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I definitely keep plants at home. When I was a child, my parents often kept plants, which influenced me a lot. I believe that having plants makes me feel more comfortable and helps purify the air. Moreover, the environment where I live is very suitable for growing plants.

제안: Correct grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'divorced my myself'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details about the experience.

예시: When I was young, I often spent time planting sunflowers with my grandparents. Sunflowers not only help purify the air but also make me happier because they are a symbol of happiness.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words to organize ideas clearly. Provide more specific details about the skills and conditions needed for growing plants.

예시: I have learned many skills for planting sunflowers and other plants. Firstly, having a suitable environment is essential. In addition, good soil and adequate water are important factors for healthy plant growth.

제안: Correct vocabulary errors such as 'plans' instead of 'plants' and unclear phrases like 'choose out or control into their mother'. Use linking words and provide clearer, more specific examples of occasions and meanings.

예시: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts on special occasions or festivals. For example, during Mother's Day, it is common to give flowers to mothers as a symbol of kindness and gratitude.

× I keep plans at home and when I was a child my parents often keep plans.

✓ I keep plants at home and when I was a child my parents often kept plants.

The word 'plans' is incorrect; it should be 'plants' to refer to living organisms. Also, 'keep' should be in past tense 'kept' to match 'when I was a child'.

× It influenced me because I think keeping plans can make me more comfortable and purify the airs.

✓ It influenced me because I think keeping plants can make me more comfortable and purify the air.

The plural 'airs' is incorrect; 'air' is an uncountable noun and should be singular. Also, 'plans' should be 'plants'.

× Where I live in, it's very comfortable for the environment.

✓ Where I live, it's very comfortable for the environment.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'Where I live'. The phrase 'Where I live' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× When I were young I often divorced my myself to plant a sunflower with my grandparents.

✓ When I was young I often devoted myself to planting sunflowers with my grandparents.

'Were' should be 'was' for first person singular past tense. 'Divorced my myself' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'devoted myself'. Also, 'plant' should be 'planting' to indicate the activity.

× And you know, the sunflowers can purify the air and what's more, it make me happier because it's a symbol of happiness.

✓ And you know, sunflowers can purify the air and what's more, they make me happier because they're a symbol of happiness.

'The sunflowers' is better as 'sunflowers' in general. 'It make' is incorrect; 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'sunflowers' and 'make' should be 'make' (plural verb). 'It's' should be 'they're' to match plural subject.

× I think I acquire a lots of skills for planning sunflowers or some, uh, plants.

✓ I think I have acquired a lot of skills for planting sunflowers or some, uh, plants.

'A lots of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a lot of'. Also, 'planning' should be 'planting' as the activity of growing plants.

× Uh, firstly, I think the, uh, suitable environment is essential parts of planting.

✓ Uh, firstly, I think a suitable environment is an essential part of planting.

'The suitable environment' should be 'a suitable environment' to indicate one of many possible environments. 'Essential parts' should be singular 'an essential part' to agree with singular 'environment'.

× Uh, besides of that, the soil and the water is essential part of.

✓ Uh, besides that, the soil and the water are essential parts.

'Besides of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'besides that'. Also, 'soil and water' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' and 'essential parts' plural. The phrase 'part of' is incomplete and unnecessary here.

× Yes, Chinese people always send plans as a gift, special occasion or special festivals are, you know, during Mother's Day, Chinese people always choose out or control into their mother, which is a symbols worth kindness and, uh, gratitude.

✓ Yes, Chinese people always send plants as gifts on special occasions or festivals. For example, during Mother's Day, Chinese people always choose flowers for their mothers, which are symbols of kindness and gratitude.

'Plans' should be 'plants'. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'always send'. 'Special occasion or special festivals are' is ungrammatical; it should be 'on special occasions or festivals'. 'Choose out or control into their mother' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'choose flowers for their mothers'. 'A symbols' is incorrect; 'symbols' is plural and should not have 'a'.