Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations, and add one specific example to support your reason. Use a linking phrase when adding detail.

예시: Yes, I keep several potted herbs and flowering plants at home. For example, I grow mint and jasmine on my balcony, which help freshen the air and create a pleasant smell that makes the living room more relaxing.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, use correct noun forms and grammar, and add one or two specific details (why you liked them or how you cared for them). Avoid filler sounds and unclear phrases.

예시: When I was a child, I grew lilies and basil in small pots on our windowsill. I loved lilies because they smelled lovely, and I often helped my parents water the basil so we could use it in cooking.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and two specific practical points. Use linking words (for example, firstly, also) and avoid many hesitations. Be precise about care tasks and frequency if possible.

예시: Yes, I know some basics about growing plants. For example, you should water most houseplants once or twice a week, and you should also fertilize them monthly to promote healthy growth.

제안: Answer directly and distinguish between plants and flowers. Provide a clear reason and a cultural example, using linking words and complete sentences. Avoid trailing off without finishing the thought.

예시: Yes, people in China often give flowers on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. For example, roses are popular for romantic occasions, while chrysanthemums are sometimes given to show respect.

× Yes, I like planting herbs and flowers at my home.

✓ Yes, I like planting herbs and flowers at my home.

No correction needed for grammar; 'planting' as a gerund (verb in present participle form) correctly follows 'like'. Keep pronunciation/fluency improvements (reduce pauses) but grammatically the sentence is correct.

× When I was a child, I used to grow Lily and basil at my home that they look a beautiful and pleasant Mm-hmm and my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I used to grow lilies and basil at my home because they looked beautiful and pleasant to my parents.

This sentence has several issues that match items in the provided list: singular/plural issue (ID 1) — 'Lily' should be plural 'lilies' when referring to the plant type in general; past tense issue (ID 5) — 'look' should be past 'looked' to match 'used to grow'; sentence structure errors (ID 26) — the clause 'that they look a beautiful and pleasant Mm-hmm and my parents' is ungrammatical and unclear, so rephrase to 'because they looked beautiful and pleasant to my parents'. Also adjust article/adjective use ('a beautiful' is wrong with plural). Suggestion: use consistent past tense when talking about habitual past actions and keep noun number consistent with meaning.

× Yes, growing plans and needs, uh, detailed, uh, schedule to, uh, keep, uh, them, uh, watering and you have to, uh, stick to the, the plan, uh, some.

✓ Yes. Growing plants needs a detailed schedule for watering; you have to stick to that plan.

Multiple grammar problems apply from the list: incorrect word choice/typo causing sentence structure errors (ID 26) and verb/noun form issues (IDs 8 and 9) — 'growing plans' should be 'growing plants' and 'needs' should match subject; the original is fragmented and lacks clear verb phrases. The corrected sentence uses a clear subject-verb agreement ('growing plants needs' could be improved to 'growing plants requires', but 'growing plants needs' is acceptable colloquially). Suggestion: organize ideas into complete clauses, use 'watering' as a noun with 'schedule for watering', and avoid filler sounds.

× Yes, we usually send flowers as a gift one special occasions such as a birthdays or anniversaries and they are uh, the symbol of uh.

✓ Yes, we usually send flowers as a gift on special occasions such as birthdays or anniversaries; they are a symbol of good wishes.

Errors correspond to article errors (ID 22) and preposition use (ID 11) and number agreement (ID 1). 'one special occasions' is incorrect: use 'on special occasions' (preposition and plural). 'a birthdays' is wrong; use 'birthdays' without 'a'. Also 'the symbol of' is incomplete — use 'a symbol of [something]'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'on', drop incorrect articles before plural nouns, and complete the thought after 'symbol of'.