Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a short reason and a brief supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and concise expressions (max 3–4 sentences). For example, say you don’t keep plants because you are busy, explain how your schedule prevents care, and mention any alternative (e.g. low-maintenance plants) if relevant.

예시: No, I don't keep plants at home because I don't have enough time to look after them. My work keeps me away from home for long hours, so I worry I would forget to water them. If I had more time, I might choose low-maintenance succulents.

제안: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, correct tenses, and concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'for a school project' or 'during a class') to make the sequence clear. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct plural/verb agreement.

예시: When I was young, we grew green beans in class as a school project. Each student planted seeds in small cups, and we watched them sprout over a few weeks.

제안: Give a direct answer then add a brief specific detail about what you know or how you learn. Fix grammar (use 'friends', 'ask them', correct verb forms). Avoid vagueness and keep to 2–3 sentences. Mention one concrete thing you have learned from friends.

예시: Not really — I'm not an expert in planting, but I have learned a little from friends. For example, one friend taught me how to plant seeds in small pots and when to water them.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear cultural reason and a short example. Fix grammar and complete the sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to explain. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be specific about occasions or alternatives (e.g. flowers, fruit baskets).

예시: I would say it's not very common because plants require ongoing care and responsibility. For example, people often prefer to give flowers or food gifts for festivals instead of a living plant.

× No I don't because plant need to be care by time and caring.

✓ No, I don't because plants need to be cared for and looked after over time.

Errors: 'plant' should be plural 'plants' (singular/plural issue) and 'need to be care' uses base verb instead of past participle; correct is 'cared for'. Also 'by time and caring' is unnatural; 'over time' and 'looked after' are appropriate. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about plants and use 'cared for' or 'looked after' to show passive care over time.

× Since I don't have enough time stay at home I would be concerned if I can't take them.

✓ Since I don't have enough time to stay at home, I would be concerned if I couldn't take care of them.

Errors: missing 'to' before 'stay' (verb infinitive required) and mix of present/future conditional: 'can't' should be 'couldn't' to match the conditional 'would be concerned'. Also 'take them' is vague; use 'take care of them'. Suggestion: use infinitive after 'time' and consistent conditional verb forms.

× I remember when I was little we have a lesson was planning green beans and we growing the green beans in our classroom that make every student.

✓ I remember when I was little we had a lesson about planting green beans and we grew the green beans in our classroom; every student had one.

Errors: 'have' should be past 'had' (past tense), 'was planning' is wrong aspect for the activity—use 'about planting', 'we growing' should be past 'we grew', and the clause 'that make every student' is ungrammatical—clarify as 'every student had one'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events and use 'planting' after 'about'.

× No I don't I'm not an expert of planting but some of my friend they really know about how to planting seeds so I always ask him for their in.

✓ No, I'm not an expert in planting, but some of my friends really know how to plant seeds, so I always ask them for help.

Errors: 'I don't' unnecessary; combine 'No' and 'I'm'. Use 'in' rather than 'of' after 'expert'. 'Friend' needs plural 'friends'. 'They really know about how to planting seeds' should be 'know how to plant seeds' (infinitive, not gerund). 'Ask him for their in' is unclear—should be 'ask them for help'. Suggestion: use correct preposition with 'expert', pluralize nouns, and use 'know how to + base verb'.

× I would say not common because sending plant is like giving a pet because you need to take time to take off this creation and I.

✓ I would say it's not common because sending a plant is like giving a pet: you need to take time to care for it.

Errors: missing 'it is' contraction 'it's' after 'say'; 'sending plant' needs an article 'a plant'; 'take off this creation' is incorrect phrase—use 'care for it'. The sentence ends mid-clause 'and I.' which should be removed. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' for clarity, use articles with singular countable nouns, and use the collocation 'care for' rather than 'take off'.