Plants— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct verb forms and repetition, and add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, mention one type of plant and a concrete benefit.

예시: Yes, I keep several potted plants at home. For example, I have a snake plant which not only brightens the living room but also helps purify the air for my family.

제안: Improve grammar, sentence structure and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (for example, so, therefore) and correct verb tenses. Be specific about the experience and avoid vague phrases.

예시: The first plant I grew was roses because I’ve always loved flowers. For instance, I would pick a few blooms to give to my teachers on Teacher’s Day, which made those moments very memorable.

제안: Correct grammar and use clearer linking words. Provide one specific example of what you learned and how it changed your practice. Keep responses natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I knew nothing about planting as a child, but when I was about 20 I learned a lot from YouTube tutorials and gardening forums. For example, I learned how to water correctly and choose the right soil, so now I care for my plants much more successfully.

제안: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Give a concise general statement and one specific example, using correct grammar. Use a linking word to connect the example to the general point.

예시: Yes, many Chinese people do give plants as gifts. For example, it is common to give bamboo plants because they symbolize good luck and prosperity.

× I have some plants at home and I believe the plants giving me uh, positive energy besides being an efficient, efficient, uh, oxygen provider for my family members.

✓ I have some plants at home and I believe the plants give me positive energy besides being an efficient oxygen provider for my family members.

Use the base form 'give' after the subject 'the plants' in present simple to express a habitual or general truth. 'Giving' would require an auxiliary (are giving) or a different structure. Also remove filler repetitions and extra commas to improve clarity.

× When I was young, the first plant that I grew was the roses because I love flowers so much and then the flowers I can use.

✓ When I was young, the first plants that I grew were roses because I loved flowers so much and could use them.

Mismatch between singular 'plant' and plural 'roses'; change to plural 'plants' and 'were'. Also tense consistency: use past tense 'loved' for a past period. Replace 'the flowers I can use' with 'could use them' to match past timeframe and include pronoun 'them' for clarity.

× I use it to give to my teachers during their teachers day.

✓ I used them to give to my teachers during Teachers' Day.

Describing a past habit requires past tense 'used'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'roses/flowers'. 'Teachers' Day' is a specific event and needs an apostrophe; capitalize as a holiday name.

× So it's was an interesting moments to be.

✓ So those were interesting moments to experience.

Original mixes contractions and tense ('it's was') and mismatches singular/plural ('an interesting moments'). Correct structure: use past tense 'were' for plural 'moments' and rephrase to 'interesting moments to experience' for natural English.

× Honestly when I was child I had zero knowledge about planting plant but when I turned to 20 I learned so much from the YouTube and online forum channel.

✓ Honestly, when I was a child I had zero knowledge about planting, but when I turned 20 I learned a lot from YouTube and online forums.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and awkward phrase 'planting plant' should be 'planting' or 'growing plants'. 'Turned to 20' is nonstandard; use 'turned 20'. Use past tense 'learned' (kept) and 'a lot' is more natural than 'so much'. 'YouTube' and 'online forums' don't need 'the'.

× So I believe that I planted with knowledge and more wisely.

✓ So I believe that I planted more knowledgeably/with more knowledge and more wisely.

Adverb placement: 'more wisely' is fine but 'planted with knowledge' is awkward; use 'planted more knowledgeably' or 'planted with more knowledge'. Ensure adverb 'more wisely' modifies the verb 'planted' and combine for clarity.

× Uh, I can see that some Chinese neighbors, they give the plants, which I can say the bamboo plants, uh, if I'm not mistaken, to their guests.

✓ I can see that some Chinese neighbors give plants, such as bamboo, to their guests, if I'm not mistaken.

Remove redundant subject pronoun 'they' after 'neighbors'. Use 'such as bamboo' instead of awkward clause 'which I can say the bamboo plants'. Place 'if I'm not mistaken' at the end for natural flow. Simplify 'the plants' to 'plants'.