Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you like blue. For example, mention feelings or associations with the color.

예시: My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sea and the beach, which make me feel calm and happy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and confusing. Focus on giving a clear reason why you dislike red, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unrelated or unclear ideas.

예시: I dislike the color red because it reminds me of danger and fire, which can be scary.

제안: Try to organize your answer clearly and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why your siblings like those colors.

예시: My sisters like pink because it is bright and cheerful, while my brothers prefer black because it looks strong and elegant.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and explain clearly why a certain color makes you uncomfortable.

예시: The color black makes me uncomfortable in my room because it feels dark and scary, and it makes the space look smaller.

× My favorite color is blue because it is the best color because it gives us the the the look of the sea and the beach and we love the color blue.

✓ My favorite color is blue because it is the best color as it gives us the look of the sea and the beach, and we love the color blue.

The sentence contains repeated articles 'the the the' which is incorrect. Also, the sentence is a bit redundant with 'because' used twice. Removing extra articles and restructuring improves clarity.

× Red because red give a gift, gives us a color of hell.

✓ Red, because red gives a feeling of hell.

The verb 'give' does not agree with the singular subject 'red'. It should be 'gives'. Also, 'give a gift' is unclear in this context; 'gives a feeling' is more appropriate.

× We don't love help and it gave us of their lover.

✓ We don't love red and it reminds us of danger.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'Help' and 'lover' are incorrect here. Replacing with clearer pronouns and meaning improves understanding.

× We both love. We don't love the lover because the lover kills human.

✓ We both dislike it because it symbolizes danger to humans.

The use of 'lover' is incorrect and confusing. The sentence lacks clarity and proper pronoun use. Correcting pronouns and clarifying meaning is necessary.

× My friends like the color pink because, uh, they, they are my sisters.

✓ My friends like the color pink because they are my sisters.

The repetition of 'they' is unnecessary. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× My brothers like the color of the black because it gives them the color of the black flower.

✓ My brothers like the color black because it reminds them of black flowers.

The phrase 'color of the black' is incorrect; it should be 'color black'. Also, 'gives them the color of the black flower' is awkward; 'reminds them of black flowers' is clearer.

× So we have.

✓ So we have these preferences.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'these preferences' completes the thought.

× Blocked because it says it's gonna give us lightness and it will make us scared and it will we will think that there is more stairs in the room.

✓ Black, because it is said to give a gloomy feeling, and it makes us scared; we think there are more stairs in the room.

'Blocked' is incorrect; it should be 'black'. The sentence is run-on and awkward. Correcting the adjective and restructuring improves clarity.