Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like 'And'. Also, combine related ideas to make your answer more fluent and natural. For example, you can say: 'I like black because it is simple, elegant, and matches most of my clothes.'

예시: My favorite colour is black because it is simple, elegant, and goes well with most of my clothes.

제안: Be careful with grammar and clarity. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Instead of 'I'm a person who and hates to watch blood or afraid of watching blunt', say 'I dislike red because it reminds me of blood, and I am afraid of seeing blood.'

예시: I dislike the colour red because it reminds me of blood, and I feel uncomfortable seeing blood.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make a clear topic sentence and support it with details. For example: 'Most of my friends prefer black, followed by white. Many of them often wear black or white shirts.'

예시: Most of my friends prefer black as their favourite colour, and white is the second most popular. They often wear black or white shirts.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to express your idea clearly and avoid unnecessary words. For example: 'Red makes me uncomfortable, so I don't like to have red walls or decorations in my room.'

예시: Red makes me uncomfortable, so I avoid having red walls or decorations in my room.

× And it goes with everything. As well as most of my clothes are black.

✓ It goes with everything, and most of my clothes are black.

The original sentence is a fragment and incorrectly uses 'As well as' to connect two independent clauses. Combining them with 'and' forms a complete sentence.

× I think I dislike red becauses it reminds me of blood and I'm a person who and hates to watch blood or afraid of watching blunt.

✓ I think I dislike red because it reminds me of blood, and I'm a person who hates to watch blood or is afraid of watching blood.

The sentence has conjunction errors and misspellings ('becauses', 'blunt'). 'And' is incorrectly placed before 'hates'. Also, 'blunt' should be 'blood'. Correct conjunctions and spelling improve clarity.

× I think most of my friends like me prefer black.

✓ I think most of my friends prefer black.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used here. The subject should be 'my friends' without 'me' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, all my friends were. Black shirts or white?

✓ Uh, all my friends wear black or white shirts.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Were' is incorrect here; 'wear' is the correct verb. The question mark is unnecessary as this is a statement.

× As I mentioned, red is the most colors that I hate.

✓ As I mentioned, red is the color that I hate the most.

'Most colors' is plural but 'red' is singular. The phrase should be 'the color that I hate the most' to correctly express the superlative.

× It makes me unconfortable and I hate to see her read the in a. Wall or anything? Because I hate it.

✓ It makes me uncomfortable, and I hate to see red on the wall or anywhere because I hate it.

'Unconfortable' is misspelled; should be 'uncomfortable'. 'Her read the in a. Wall or anything?' is nonsensical and likely intended as 'red on the wall or anywhere'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.