Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding more specific reasons and linking words to make it more coherent and natural. Try to avoid starting with 'Actually' as it sounds less confident. Also, use plural 'colors' consistently and avoid redundancy.

예시: My favorite colour is green because it represents nature and growth. Moreover, green has a calming effect on me, which helps me relax after a busy day.

제안: Your answer is thoughtful but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to subject-verb agreement ('colors have' instead of 'colors has').

예시: Although I appreciate all colours for their unique meanings, I dislike black because it often symbolizes sadness and fear, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Avoid unnecessary fillers like 'she's an artist on told me'. Use correct verb forms and articles. Also, try to expand your answer with linking words and more details.

예시: My best friend, who is an artist, told me that she likes orange the most because it reminds her of dawn, a time she finds inspiring and full of hope.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains hesitations ('uh', 'may maybe'). Try to avoid fillers and be more precise. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar ('increases' instead of 'it's increased'). Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

예시: I avoid using black in my room because it increases darkness and can create a gloomy atmosphere. Instead, I prefer bright colours from the rainbow to make the space cheerful and uplifting.

× I like almost all colors because all the colors has its own significance and impact in our nature.

✓ I like almost all colors because all the colors have their own significance and impact in our nature.

The subject 'colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has', and the possessive pronoun should be 'their' instead of 'its' to agree in number with the plural noun.

× My best friend, she's an artist on told me that she like orange color most because it's the color of dawn.

✓ My best friend, she's an artist, told me that she likes orange color most because it's the color of dawn.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'on told me' is incorrect; it should be 'told me'. A comma is added after 'artist' for clarity.

× She like Dawn very much.

✓ She likes dawn very much.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'Dawn' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun here; 'dawn' as a time of day is common noun.

× I don't prefer black color in my room because it's increased the darkness of the uh room and may maybe foster the depression or anxiety in our mind.

✓ I don't prefer black color in my room because it increases the darkness of the room and may foster depression or anxiety in our mind.

The verb 'it's increased' is incorrect; it should be 'it increases' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement. Also, 'the depression or anxiety' should be 'depression or anxiety' without 'the' as these are general conditions. The filler 'uh' is removed for clarity.