Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: My favorite colour is yellow because it makes me feel energetic and happy, especially after a tiring day. Although some people think yellow is cheesy, I find it very beautiful and uplifting.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là sự hòa hợp giữa chủ ngữ và động từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'detest' trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Although I like most colours, I dislike green because it doesn't suit my skin tone and is difficult to match with my daily outfits. Therefore, I usually avoid wearing green.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: Most of my friends prefer white because it is easy to mix and match with their clothes. Also, white makes them feel bright and cheerful when they are tired.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý đã nói trước đó và chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều, số ít và cách dùng từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên từ để kết nối ý.

예시: I dislike green in my room because it strains my eyes. Also, as a girl, I don't enjoy decorating my room with green items.

× I'm really interested in the things with the yellow ones, like some people say that yellow is the cheesiest colors, but for me it's really beautiful and when I see it, the yellow color, it boosts my energy up really good and it's make me feel happy after the tired day.

✓ I'm really interested in things with the yellow color, like some people say that yellow is the cheesiest color, but for me it's really beautiful and when I see it, the yellow color, it boosts my energy up really well and it makes me feel happy after a tired day.

The word 'things' is plural but 'the yellow ones' is redundant and awkward here; 'colors' should be singular 'color' because 'yellow' is one color; 'really good' should be 'really well' as it modifies the verb 'boosts'; 'it's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject; 'the tired day' should be 'a tired day' because it is a general statement.

× I love all the color but if I need to choose one that I detest I would choose green because the color green is not matches with my skins and also it's really hard for me to mix with my daily outfit.

✓ I love all the colors but if I need to choose one that I detest, I would choose green because the color green does not match my skin and also it's really hard for me to mix with my daily outfits.

'color' should be plural 'colors' when referring to all colors; 'is not matches' is incorrect, should be 'does not match' for subject-verb agreement; 'skins' should be singular 'skin' as it refers to the person's skin; 'outfit' should be plural 'outfits' to match 'daily' usage.

× Most of my friend really drawn with the color white because they say that it's really easy for them to mix and match with their daily outfits and also the white color is look make them feel bright, full and cheer them up when they feel tired.

✓ Most of my friends are really drawn to the color white because they say that it's really easy for them to mix and match with their daily outfits and also the white color looks like it makes them feel bright, full, and cheers them up when they feel tired.

'friend' should be plural 'friends' after 'most of'; 'really drawn with' should be 'really drawn to' as the correct preposition; 'is look make' is incorrect, should be 'looks like it makes' for correct verb forms and meaning; 'cheer' should be 'cheers' to agree with singular subject 'white color'.

× As I said before I hate the color green because when I look at the things of green my eyes is really hurt and also I'm the girl 1 so I'm not really enjoy decorating my rooms with the green things.

✓ As I said before, I hate the color green because when I look at green things, my eyes really hurt and also I'm a girl, so I don't really enjoy decorating my room with green things.

'things of green' should be 'green things' for correct adjective order; 'my eyes is' should be 'my eyes really hurt' for subject-verb agreement and natural expression; 'I'm the girl 1' is unclear and corrected to 'I'm a girl'; 'I'm not really enjoy' should be 'I don't really enjoy' for correct verb form; 'rooms' should be singular 'room' as it refers to the speaker's room.