Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and making your descriptions more precise and natural. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct some awkward phrases, for example, 'It's like an Angel and describing a blue sky' is unclear. You could say, 'I especially like skylight purple because it reminds me of a clear blue sky and has a fancy, elegant feel.'

예시: My favorite colour is purple, especially skylight purple, because it reminds me of a clear blue sky and feels very elegant. For this reason, I own many purple items, including my school bag.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid vague phrases like 'I may dislike' and unclear sentences such as 'Using red as a colour so that I can remind myself keeping my mind.' Try to explain your reasons more logically and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, you could say, 'I dislike red because I have read that it can make people feel angry, so I try to avoid using red in my daily life to stay calm.'

예시: I dislike the colour red because I have read that it can make people feel angry. Therefore, I try to avoid using red in my daily life to help keep a calm mind.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, 'the most bright colour' should be 'the brightest colour' and 'white represents pure' should be 'white represents purity.' Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: My friends often say they like white because it is the brightest colour. Moreover, white represents purity, which reflects the simple and peaceful lifestyle they desire to feel happy and relaxed.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better linking. The phrase 'it is a quite big opposite to my car' is confusing and likely a mistake. Try to explain why black contrasts with your room's pink tone and how that affects your feelings. For example, 'Black makes me feel uneasy in my pink-themed room because it contrasts sharply with the soft colours, disrupting the harmony.'

예시: Black makes me feel uneasy in my room because it contrasts sharply with the pink tones of my desk and bed. This strong contrast disrupts the calm and cozy atmosphere I prefer.

× My friends often tell me that they like white because it is the most bright colour and white represents pure, which is the lifestyle they are eager to because they want a simple life to make them feel happy and relaxed.

✓ My friends often tell me that they like white because it is the brightest colour and white represents purity, which is the lifestyle they are eager for because they want a simple life to make them feel happy and relaxed.

The adjective 'bright' should be in its superlative form 'brightest' when comparing one colour as the most bright. Also, 'pure' is an adjective, but here a noun 'purity' is needed to represent the concept. The phrase 'eager to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'eager for' when referring to a desired thing or lifestyle.

× Using red as a colour so that I can remind myself keeping my mind.

✓ Using red as a colour so that I can remind myself to keep my mind.

The verb 'remind' is followed by the infinitive form 'to keep' rather than the gerund 'keeping'. The preposition 'to' is necessary here to indicate purpose or intention.

× I may dislike red because I've seen research showing that red would make people feel angry and therefore avoid having necessities.

✓ I may dislike red because I've seen research showing that red can make people feel angry and therefore avoid having necessities.

The modal verb 'would' is not appropriate here to express a general truth or possibility; 'can' is more suitable. Also, 'avoid having necessities' is awkward; however, since the instruction is to only correct grammar mistakes listed, the modal verb usage is corrected.

× My friends often tell me that they like white because it is the most bright colour and white represents pure, which is the lifestyle they are eager to because they want a simple life to make them feel happy and relaxed.

✓ My friends often tell me that they like white because it is the brightest colour and white represents purity, which is the lifestyle they are eager for because they want a simple life to make them feel happy and relaxed.

The adjective 'bright' should be in its superlative form 'brightest' when comparing one colour as the most bright. Also, 'pure' is an adjective, but here a noun 'purity' is needed to represent the concept. The phrase 'eager to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'eager for' when referring to a desired thing or lifestyle.

× Uncomfortable because it is a quite big opposite to my car.

✓ Uncomfortable because it is quite the opposite of my car.

The phrase 'a quite big opposite to' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'quite the opposite of'. Also, 'big' is unnecessary here and 'to' should be 'of' when indicating contrast.