Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "mostly beloved" which sound awkward. Also, try to add a linking phrase to explain why you like red, making your answer more coherent.

예시: My favorite color is definitely red because it's vibrant and bright, which makes me feel energetic and happy.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and use more natural expressions. Also, instead of saying "black color," just say "black." Provide a clearer reason with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I dislike black because it makes me feel a bit sad; it reminds me of funerals and gloomy occasions.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "between each other with each other." Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I’m not sure because we rarely talk about colors, but I think my childhood friend prefers bright colors like yellow and orange.

제안: There are some grammar mistakes and contradictory statements here. Black is not bright, so saying "too bright" is incorrect. Also, avoid pluralizing "black colors" unnecessarily. Try to make your answer clearer and more natural.

예시: Although I like bright colors, black in my room makes me feel uncomfortable and not cozy because it feels too dark for daily living.

× My mostly beloved color is definitely red since it's super vibrant and bright.

✓ My most beloved color is definitely red since it's super vibrant and bright.

The phrase 'mostly beloved' is incorrect because 'mostly' is an adverb of degree and does not correctly modify 'beloved' in this context. The correct adjective form is 'most beloved' to express the superlative degree of affection for the color.

× I really hate black color as it makes me feel a little bit sad and uh, feels like we're on someone's funeral because of that.

✓ I really hate the color black as it makes me feel a little bit sad and, uh, it feels like we're at someone's funeral because of that.

The phrase 'black color' is awkward; 'the color black' is the correct form. Also, the sentence lacks a subject before 'feels like'; adding 'it' clarifies the subject. Additionally, 'on someone's funeral' is incorrect preposition usage; 'at someone's funeral' is correct.

× I really hate black color as it makes me feel a little bit sad and uh, feels like we're on someone's funeral because of that.

✓ I really hate the color black as it makes me feel a little bit sad and, uh, it feels like we're at someone's funeral because of that.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to attending a funeral. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location or event attendance.

× Actually, I don't really know because we don't discuss such things between each other with each other.

✓ Actually, I don't really know because we don't discuss such things with each other.

The phrase 'between each other with each other' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'discuss' in this context is 'with each other'.

× Although I'm really into bright colors, any black colors which are used in a room makes me feel super uncomfortable and not cozy because they're too bright to see them on daily basis.

✓ Although I'm really into bright colors, any black color used in a room makes me feel super uncomfortable and not cozy because it's too dark to see on a daily basis.

'Any black colors' is incorrect because 'any' with plural 'colors' conflicts with the singular verb 'makes'. It should be singular 'any black color' to agree with 'makes'. Also, 'too bright' is incorrect for black color; it should be 'too dark'. Additionally, 'to see them on daily basis' is awkward; 'to see on a daily basis' is correct.