Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why red suits your skin tone and how it uplifts your mood with clear reasons.

예시: My favorite colour is red because it complements my skin tone and uplifts my mood. For instance, I often wear red on special occasions like anniversaries and birthdays, as it makes me feel confident and energetic.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer more natural and effective. Provide specific reasons why neon colors are unpleasant for you and use linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: I dislike neon colors because they are too vibrant and strain my eyes. Moreover, they don't suit my personal style, so I prefer to avoid wearing them.

제안: Make sure your sentences are complete and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why your friends prefer these colours.

예시: My friends mostly like bright colours such as red, yellow, and dark green because these colours make them feel more energetic and help them stand out in a crowd.

제안: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly and provide specific reasons why bright colours make you uncomfortable and neutral colours help you relax.

예시: I prefer not to have bright colours in my room because they make it hard to relax. Instead, I like neutral colours like light blue and light green, which create a calm and soothing atmosphere.

× My favorite colour is red because it is it is suitable for my skin tone and for emotionality and when I wear the red colour it helps me to uplift my mood and I often wear red colour in specific occasions like such as anniversary and birthday.

✓ My favorite colour is red because it is suitable for my skin tone and for emotionality, and when I wear the red colour it helps me uplift my mood. I often wear red colour on specific occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays.

The original sentence contains repeated words ('it is it is') and awkward phrasing ('helps me to uplift my mood' should be 'helps me uplift my mood'). Also, 'in specific occasions like such as anniversary and birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'on specific occasions such as anniversaries and birthdays' because 'on' is the correct preposition for occasions, and plural forms are needed for general events.

× I don't like neon colors because it is too vibrant and, and and it hurt my eyes and it is not my cup of my tea. So I I would not prefer the neon colors. Yeah, it it, it does not suit with my.

✓ I don't like neon colors because they are too vibrant and they hurt my eyes. It is not my cup of tea, so I would not prefer neon colors. Yeah, they do not suit me.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('it is' should be 'they are' for plural 'neon colors'), repeated words, and incorrect preposition usage ('suit with' should be 'suit me'). Also, 'my cup of my tea' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'my cup of tea.'

× My friends like most red colour bright colors such as red and yellow, dark green because it helps them to more energetic and to stand out in the crowd then they they and they also like bright colors because.

✓ My friends mostly like bright colors such as red, yellow, and dark green because they help them feel more energetic and stand out in the crowd. They also like bright colors because...

The sentence has plural and singular mismatches ('red colour bright colors' is confusing), missing articles, and incomplete thoughts. 'It helps them' should be 'they help them' to agree with plural 'colors.' Also, 'to more energetic' is incorrect; it should be 'feel more energetic.' The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or rephrased.

× I I would not prefer the bright colors in in my room because it is very hard to relax and I would prefer the neutral colors like light blue, light green, light green color because it helps me to relax. I don't prefer bright colors because.

✓ I would not prefer bright colors in my room because it is very hard to relax. I would prefer neutral colors like light blue and light green because they help me relax. I don't prefer bright colors because...

The sentence has repeated words ('I I', 'in in'), incorrect article usage ('the bright colors' can be 'bright colors'), and awkward phrasing ('helps me to relax' should be 'help me relax'). Also, 'light green color' is redundant; 'light green' suffices. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or rephrased.