Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: My favorite colour is a deep navy blue because it makes me feel energized and calm at the same time. Whenever I see this colour in clothes or advertisements, it instantly boosts my mood and motivation.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'murky yellow' và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn cho sự không thích màu sắc đó.

예시: I dislike very bright colours, especially dull yellow, because they make me feel uninspired and a bit uncomfortable. For example, such colours can be too harsh on the eyes and affect my mood negatively.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có phần dài dòng không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói về bản thân không liên quan và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Although I haven't asked my friends directly, I have noticed that they often prefer emerald green in their clothes and accessories because it looks attractive and elegant.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và chính xác hơn, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'habitable' và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn không thích màu đó.

예시: I don't like painting my room walls yellow because the colour is too bright and makes my eyes feel uncomfortable. Especially light yellow can be overwhelming and distracting when I try to relax.

× Whilst picking up colour, my favorite colour must be a really saturated Navy because it just feels really energized for me and every time I see this colour or like clothings and advertisement it will automatically give me energy.

✓ Whilst picking a colour, my favorite colour must be a really saturated Navy because it just feels really energizing for me and every time I see this colour or like clothing and advertisements it automatically gives me energy.

The phrase 'picking up colour' is incorrect; the correct form is 'picking a colour' because 'pick up' is a phrasal verb meaning to lift or collect, which is not appropriate here. 'Energized' is a past participle, but the intended meaning is an ongoing feeling, so 'energizing' (verb + -ing form) is correct. 'Clothings' is incorrect because 'clothing' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match the context. Also, 'will automatically give me energy' is better as 'automatically gives me energy' to match the present tense used in the sentence.

× I particularly emphasize that I don't like the color that is too vibrant for me, like perhaps a murky yellow, because it feels really uninspirational and it just feel really sickly.

✓ I particularly emphasize that I don't like colors that are too vibrant for me, like perhaps a murky yellow, because they feel really uninspirational and they just feel really sickly.

The subject 'color' should be plural 'colors' to match the general statement. 'It feels' is correct for singular, but since 'colors' is plural, it should be 'they feel'. The verb 'feel' must agree with the plural subject. 'Uninspirational' is acceptable but uncommon; however, it is not a grammar error. The main issue is subject-verb agreement and pluralization.

× Well actually I'm an introvert and I have never asked them these questions before, but I see they normally tend to look at the emerald colors, piece of clothing or items because perhaps it looks really good.

✓ Well actually I'm an introvert and I have never asked them these questions before, but I see they normally tend to look at emerald colors, pieces of clothing, or items because perhaps they look really good.

'Emerald colors' is acceptable, but 'piece of clothing' should be pluralized to 'pieces of clothing' to match the plural context. Also, 'it looks really good' should be 'they look really good' because the subject refers to multiple items (colors, pieces of clothing, or items). This is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural consistency issue.

× In my own customizable room, I dislike to paint the wall like yellow because it just feels really bright and my eye is not habitable for these vibrance all too bright color like yellow, especially a light yellow.

✓ In my own customizable room, I dislike painting the wall yellow because it just feels really bright and my eyes are not comfortable with such vibrant, bright colors like yellow, especially light yellow.

'Dislike to paint' is incorrect; the verb 'dislike' is followed by the gerund form 'painting'. 'Like yellow' should be 'yellow' without 'like' when describing color. 'My eye is not habitable' is incorrect; 'habitable' refers to places, not eyes. The correct phrase is 'my eyes are not comfortable with'. 'These vibrance all too bright color' is ungrammatical; it should be 'such vibrant, bright colors'. Also, 'eye' should be plural 'eyes' when referring generally. The sentence has multiple preposition and word choice errors.