Colours— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น ใช้คำกริยาให้ตรงกับประธาน และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน นอกจากนี้ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและมีความหมายชัดเจนมากขึ้น

예시: My favorite color is green because it symbolizes tranquility, peace, and nature. I love looking at mountains, trees, and plants, which all remind me of calmness and relaxation.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้คำคุณศัพท์และคำนามให้เหมาะสม และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้มีความสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

예시: I dislike yellow because it is too bright and overwhelming, which distracts me. Instead, I prefer colors like blue or green that represent calmness and help me relax in my daily life.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำที่เหมาะสมกับความหมาย เช่น คำว่า 'venomity' ไม่ถูกต้อง ควรใช้คำที่สื่อความหมายได้ชัดเจน และควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้มีความชัดเจนและลื่นไหล

예시: I think my friends like the color pink the most. They told me that pink represents femininity, calmness, and elegance, so whenever they buy something pink, it looks nice.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น การใช้คำว่า 'world' ควรเป็น 'color' และควรอธิบายประสบการณ์ให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น พร้อมใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: Although I like green, I prefer white for my wall color because once my dad painted the wall green, and I found it very distracting.

× It's because green symbolize tranquility, peace and nature.

✓ It's because green symbolizes tranquility, peace and nature.

The subject 'green' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'symbolizes' to agree with the subject.

× I love seeing at the mountains, trees and plants.

✓ I love seeing the mountains, trees and plants.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; we say 'seeing the mountains' without a preposition.

× Grains also reminds me on how.

✓ Green also reminds me of how.

The word 'Grains' is likely a typo for 'Green'. Also, the correct preposition after 'reminds me' is 'of', not 'on'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as much as possible.

× I dislike yellow because it represents brightness and overwhelming and distracting for me.

✓ I dislike yellow because it represents brightness and is overwhelming and distracting for me.

The adjectives 'overwhelming' and 'distracting' need a linking verb 'is' to connect properly to the subject 'it'.

× I prefer the color which represent calmness and peace, such as blue or green which has helped me relax in my daily life.

✓ I prefer the color which represents calmness and peace, such as blue or green which have helped me relax in my daily life.

The verb 'represent' should be 'represents' to agree with singular 'color'. Also, 'which has helped' should be 'which have helped' because it refers to plural 'blue or green'.

× I think the colors that my friend liked the most is pink.

✓ I think the color that my friend liked the most is pink.

The subject is singular 'color' because the sentence refers to one favorite color, so 'colors' should be 'color'.

× I remember that my friend told me before pink represent venomity and calmness and elegance which whenever they buy something it will looks like good.

✓ I remember that my friend told me before pink represents venomity, calmness, and elegance, and whenever they buy something, it looks good.

The verb 'represent' should be 'represents' to agree with singular 'pink'. 'Looks' should not have 'will' because it's a general statement. Added commas for clarity.

× I like green, but for the world of my wall, for the color of my wall, I prefer white because I had an experience when my dad colored green.

✓ I like green, but for the color of my wall, I prefer white because I had an experience when my dad painted it green.

'World of my wall' is incorrect; it should be 'color of my wall'. Also, 'colored green' is better expressed as 'painted it green'.